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orthodoc · 06-08-2013, 10:46 AM

True. Maybe a moderator can move it. It needs work for sure; I shouldn't have posted it yet but it was one of those nights.

DanaC · 06-08-2013, 01:59 PM

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Originally Posted by orthodoc

It needs work for sure; I shouldn't have posted it yet but it was one of those nights.

Well, only you know how you want it to read, but I like it as it is. I think it is amazing.

JBKlyde · 06-08-2013, 03:58 PM

most of the time when I write poetry it is just the first thing that comes to mind.. and I try to flow with the wind... it's like free style...

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JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	most of the time when I write poetry it is just the first thing that comes to mind.. and I try to flow with the wind... it's like free style...

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