Empty Tomb

JBKlyde · 05-19-2012, 11:25 AM

It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,
Down with the gloom,
Down with the doom,
I ain't got no room for fear,
Turn from evil,
And start drawing near,
Near to God,
Near to Love,
Set your sights,
On things above,
It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,

y-f-t-p

DanaC · 05-19-2012, 11:33 AM

n-y-f-t-p

:p

JBKlyde · 05-19-2012, 09:18 PM

radio edit

It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,
To hell with the gloom,
To hell with the doom,
I ain't got no room for fear,
Turn from evil,
And start drawing near,
Near to God,
Near to Love,
Set your sights,
On things above,
It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,

sexobon · 05-19-2012, 10:02 PM

IMHO, the OP version was better. The opposite actions complement each other:
...
Jesus has risen,
...
Down with the gloom,
Down with the doom,
...
Jesus has risen,
...
Your changes would better compliment the other lines if you changed action to place elsewhere too:
...
Jesus ascends to heaven,
...
To hell with the gloom,
To hell with the doom,
...
Jesus ascends to heaven,
...
Even then I'd still prefer the OP version.

Spexxvet · 05-21-2012, 11:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JBKlyde

It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,
Down with the gloom,
Down with the doom,
I ain't got no room for fear,
Turn from evil,
And start drawing near,
Near to God,
Near to Love,
Set your sights,
On things above,
It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,

y-f-t-p

Jesus, Jesus bo Besus Bonana fanna fo Fesus
Fee fy mo Mesus, Jesus!

Undertoad · 05-21-2012, 11:12 AM

Its only a paper tomb
Sailing over cardboard Galilee
But it wouldn't be make-believe
If you believed in Je (sus)
Yes, it's only a Jewish sky
Hanging over a Muslim tree
But it wouldn't be make-believe
If you believed in Je (sus)
Without your faith
It's a honky-tonk parade
Without your faith
It's a melody played in a penny arcade
It's a Barnum and Bailey world
Just as phony as it can be
But it wouldn't be make-believe
If you believed in Je (sus)

BigV · 05-21-2012, 11:47 AM

Ouch. That was pretty awesome!

DanaC · 05-21-2012, 12:10 PM

Wow. That totally rocked.

sexobon · 05-21-2012, 08:19 PM

A really gee-whiz adaptation.

JBKlyde · 05-22-2012, 08:29 PM

yes that was nice undertoad...

infinite monkey · 05-23-2012, 10:18 AM

It's a clone-thread, a parody, and an original work, all in one!

It’s an empty comb
My hair has a schism
It’s an empty comb
Come share your wigdom
Get out the broom
Sweep up the room
I ain’t got no hair up here
Ate by boll weevils
Just as I feared
Near to bald
But I’m proud of
The smooth leather-like glove
Left by my empty comb
My hair has a schism
It’s an empty comb
Come share your wigdom

Ibby · 05-24-2012, 05:34 PM

It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,
Down with the gloom,
Down with the doom,
I ain't got no room for fear,
Turn from evil,
And start drawing near,
Near to God,
Near to Love
Set your sights,
On things above,
It's an empty tomb,
Jesus has risen,
It's an empty tomb,
Come share your wisdom,

TheMercenary · 06-14-2012, 11:21 PM

The Empty Uterus
bares no fruit
Jesus needed no uterus
He needs not your love
You need his

05-19-2012, 11:25 AM	#1
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	Empty Tomb It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom, Down with the gloom, Down with the doom, I ain't got no room for fear, Turn from evil, And start drawing near, Near to God, Near to Love, Set your sights, On things above, It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom, y-f-t-p

05-21-2012, 11:47 AM	#7
BigV Goon Squad Leader Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Seattle Posts: 27,063	Ouch. That was pretty awesome! __________________ Be Just and Fear Not.

05-24-2012, 05:34 PM	#12
Ibby erika Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "the high up north" Posts: 6,127	It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom, Down with the gloom, Down with the doom, I ain't got no room for fear, Turn from evil, And start drawing near, Near to God, Near to Love Set your sights, On things above, It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom, __________________ not really back, you didn't see me, i was never here shhhhhh

06-14-2012, 11:21 PM	#13
TheMercenary “Hypocrisy: prejudice with a halo” Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Savannah, Georgia Posts: 21,393	The Empty Uterus bares no fruit Jesus needed no uterus He needs not your love You need his __________________ Anyone but the this most fuked up President in History in 2012!

05-19-2012, 09:18 PM	#3
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	radio edit It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom, To hell with the gloom, To hell with the doom, I ain't got no room for fear, Turn from evil, And start drawing near, Near to God, Near to Love, Set your sights, On things above, It's an empty tomb, Jesus has risen, It's an empty tomb, Come share your wisdom,

05-19-2012, 10:02 PM	#4
sexobon I love it when a plan comes together. Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 9,793	IMHO, the OP version was better. The opposite actions complement each other: ... Jesus has risen, ... Down with the gloom, Down with the doom, ... Jesus has risen, ... Your changes would better compliment the other lines if you changed action to place elsewhere too: ... Jesus ascends to heaven, ... To hell with the gloom, To hell with the doom, ... Jesus ascends to heaven, ... Even then I'd still prefer the OP version.

05-21-2012, 11:12 AM	#6
Undertoad Radical Centrist Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Cottage of Prussia Posts: 31,423	Its only a paper tomb Sailing over cardboard Galilee But it wouldn't be make-believe If you believed in Je (sus) Yes, it's only a Jewish sky Hanging over a Muslim tree But it wouldn't be make-believe If you believed in Je (sus) Without your faith It's a honky-tonk parade Without your faith It's a melody played in a penny arcade It's a Barnum and Bailey world Just as phony as it can be But it wouldn't be make-believe If you believed in Je (sus)

05-21-2012, 08:19 PM	#9
sexobon I love it when a plan comes together. Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 9,793	A really gee-whiz adaptation.

05-22-2012, 08:29 PM	#10
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	yes that was nice undertoad...

05-23-2012, 10:18 AM	#11
infinite monkey Person who doesn't update the user title Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 13,002	It's a clone-thread, a parody, and an original work, all in one! It’s an empty comb My hair has a schism It’s an empty comb Come share your wigdom Get out the broom Sweep up the room I ain’t got no hair up here Ate by boll weevils Just as I feared Near to bald But I’m proud of The smooth leather-like glove Left by my empty comb My hair has a schism It’s an empty comb Come share your wigdom

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