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Old 12-22-2003, 02:45 AM   #1
kerosene
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Wow, I really like this. The dallying (sp?) guitar and your voice work well together. I agree with Toad, that your voice could be more prominent and the beat might need some change-up. I thought about recording this in a mix CD for my car...I like it a lot. The lyrics have a cut to them, too. I like the smell line, but "taste you" would really make that point, I think.
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