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Old 10-23-2010, 06:02 PM   #1
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Sad no doubt but life goes on
Til the next bright soul is lost
Well that's 16 syllables, but who's counting?

Sad no doubt but life goes on
Til the next bright soul is lost


Lamb and tyger follow
Their songlines until
Time carries song away.
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Old 10-23-2010, 06:21 PM   #2
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Well that's 16 syllables, but who's counting?
Wait a sec...I really want to get this right? Am I right in thinking that it's

Writer 1

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Writer 2

7 syllables
7 syllables.
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Old 10-25-2010, 11:12 AM   #3
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Wait a sec...I really want to get this right? Am I right in thinking that it's

Writer 1

5 syllables
7 syllables
5 syllables

Writer 2

7 syllables
7 syllables.
My bad! It is 14. Carry on!
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Old 10-25-2010, 11:25 PM   #4
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Phew!
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Old 10-23-2010, 06:54 PM   #5
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Well that's 16 syllables, but who's counting? :p
when I count it's 14 -are you from Alabama or something?
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Old 10-23-2010, 07:08 PM   #6
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when I count it's 14
Maths isn't my strong point, but I counted 14 as well. (Counting on my fingers seems to work fairly well for me too).
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