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Old 11-02-2007, 10:06 AM   #1
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Originally Posted by lumberjim View Post
A shadow dances over broken ground
Rippling as it flees, stretching, seeking.
A Black dancing Eagle makes no sound,
Shimmering as it flees, retching, peeking.

A Cowboy sights along a line of sight
death awaits in bristling barrells bright
A click, a pop, a kick, and swift flight
the bullet pulls the Bird down into the light.
A scene from brokeback mountain?

Just think of the movie "The Birds" ...Poor Romo
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