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06-12-2007, 12:43 PM
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polaroid of perfection
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: West Yorkshire
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If it's not demeaning to the real writing, I submit a simple 4 line chorus and potential bridge:
You think you know her Yes, do you just think you know her? No, she says, no, no, no Cos there’s nothing of her left to know Check the shop window baby You just Check your reflection honey Of course depends on the way the rhythm actually runs
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