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02-28-2003, 09:14 AM
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going nowhere slow
Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: L.A.
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Very nice reading your poem, is the blood "pretty"? There are a few tiny tears as well, that is a very nice poem and in the sense of a loss the reader can only feel in comparison to the reality, if it never had been written at all (while reading).
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