Laebedah's Poetry

[laebedahs]

Thanks Sun Sparkz. I think I wrote Yin and Yang when I was either 17 or 18. It didn't have a title back then. I later decided on "Yin and Yang" as the title because the sun and the moon must both exist, otherwise balance would not be.

[xoxoxoBruce]

Some are dark, most are simple, some are short, and some are off the wall.

That describes all good poetry. Yours is very, very good.
I like them all, but "There She Goes" and especially "Cold and Broken" blow my skirt way up.


PS- I think there's a mistake in the 10th line of "Cold and Broken".