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Undertoad · 06-17-2004, 04:29 PM

Aren't hands spose to be the most difficult thing to draw correctly? I can't draw at all m'self...

Happy Monkey · 06-17-2004, 04:31 PM

I only draw things that don't exist. That way, I can't do it wrong.

jaguar · 06-17-2004, 04:47 PM

Depends on the position of the hands and the lighting really, the way she's playing with the cloth is what makes this a bitch. Personally I find getting faces right far harder (as this thread will attest).

Final. (until i get nitpicky and start playing again)

lumberjim · 06-17-2004, 05:30 PM

that rocks

she looks like she's very pensive

Happy Monkey · 06-17-2004, 05:46 PM

Maybe it's just the black and white, but she kinda reminds me of Gaiman's Death.

jaguar · 06-17-2004, 05:46 PM

I was going for something a bit haunted, I think I pulled it off. Fixed up the ugly right hand as well.

lumberjim · 06-17-2004, 05:53 PM

I'd hit it.

just kidding, jinx. i would never hit it

jaguar · 06-17-2004, 05:54 PM

I was expecting to find her with a footy helmet on :P

lumberjim · 06-17-2004, 06:04 PM

naw, that gag is a one timer. if i fucked with any more, it would just be rude.

hey, take a harder look at her neck where the tattoo is. i think the contour line should be about where the edge of her neck is. i didnt notice it at first because my eyes were drawn to the tat, but she looks like a bit of a bucket neck.

jaguar · 06-17-2004, 06:06 PM

hmmmm you have a point. arrrrgghhh, not sure how that got this far.

jaguar · 06-19-2004, 03:36 PM

Not really sure what this is, where it came from or what I think of it so I thought id' see what you lot thought.
Does remind me a bit of an ex though.

jaguar · 06-20-2004, 03:18 PM

noone has anything to say about that?
How about this?

Clodfobble · 06-20-2004, 03:37 PM

I like the blurred buildings, but I would prefer if the main figure weren't as blurred. Especially the feet.

And as for the previous one, I think her nose is a little too big like the last one. (Great nose on this most recent one though.)

jaguar · 06-20-2004, 04:10 PM

I wanted the cahracter to be 'falling' obviously but the motion blur in pshop seems to be locked into doing both 'sides' so i'll clean it up manually.

York · 06-21-2004, 06:41 AM

Your "bitch" up-there is coool! But it took me a while to figure out if she was really young again or..? Her hair and image seem well aged, but her body got stuck! hahaha

06-17-2004, 04:31 PM	#47
Happy Monkey I think this line's mostly filler. Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: DC Posts: 13,575	I only draw things that don't exist. That way, I can't do it wrong. __________________ _________________ \|...............\| We live in the nick of times. \| Len 17, Wid 3 \| \|_______________\| [pics]

06-17-2004, 04:47 PM	#48
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	Depends on the position of the hands and the lighting really, the way she's playing with the cloth is what makes this a bitch. Personally I find getting faces right far harder (as this thread will attest). Final. (until i get nitpicky and start playing again) Attached Images __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-17-2004, 05:30 PM	#49
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	that rocks she looks like she's very pensive __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

06-17-2004, 05:46 PM	#50
Happy Monkey I think this line's mostly filler. Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: DC Posts: 13,575	Maybe it's just the black and white, but she kinda reminds me of Gaiman's Death. __________________ _________________ \|...............\| We live in the nick of times. \| Len 17, Wid 3 \| \|_______________\| [pics]

06-17-2004, 05:46 PM	#51
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	I was going for something a bit haunted, I think I pulled it off. Fixed up the ugly right hand as well. __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-17-2004, 04:29 PM	#46
Undertoad Radical Centrist Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Cottage of Prussia Posts: 31,423	Aren't hands spose to be the most difficult thing to draw correctly? I can't draw at all m'self...

06-17-2004, 05:53 PM	#52
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	I'd hit it. just kidding, jinx. i would never hit it __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

06-17-2004, 05:54 PM	#53
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	I was expecting to find her with a footy helmet on :P __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-17-2004, 06:04 PM	#54
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	naw, that gag is a one timer. if i fucked with any more, it would just be rude. hey, take a harder look at her neck where the tattoo is. i think the contour line should be about where the edge of her neck is. i didnt notice it at first because my eyes were drawn to the tat, but she looks like a bit of a bucket neck. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

06-17-2004, 06:06 PM	#55
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	hmmmm you have a point. arrrrgghhh, not sure how that got this far. __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-19-2004, 03:36 PM	#56
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	Not really sure what this is, where it came from or what I think of it so I thought id' see what you lot thought. Does remind me a bit of an ex though. Attached Images __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-20-2004, 03:18 PM	#57
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	noone has anything to say about that? How about this? Attached Images __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-20-2004, 03:37 PM	#58
Clodfobble UNDER CONDITIONAL MITIGATION Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 20,012	I like the blurred buildings, but I would prefer if the main figure weren't as blurred. Especially the feet. And as for the previous one, I think her nose is a little too big like the last one. (Great nose on this most recent one though.)

06-20-2004, 04:10 PM	#59
jaguar whig Join Date: Apr 2001 Posts: 5,075	I wanted the cahracter to be 'falling' obviously but the motion blur in pshop seems to be locked into doing both 'sides' so i'll clean it up manually. __________________ Good friends, good books and a sleepy conscience: this is the ideal life. - Twain

06-21-2004, 06:41 AM	#60
York Operations Operative Join Date: May 2004 Location: Tienen , Belgium Posts: 537	Your "bitch" up-there is coool! But it took me a while to figure out if she was really young again or..? Her hair and image seem well aged, but her body got stuck! hahaha

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