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Old 11-12-2018, 07:55 PM   #11
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Originally Posted by Flint View Post
Parties, politicians and PACs that want "less regulation" are, or represent, ...the wolves that are ALWAYS at the door.
Made readable especially if that last run-on sentence were broken down into a sentence for each concept or point. It reads too much like a lawyer's brief. I could not figure out who was the party of the first part. And never did find the relevant verb in that first sentence.

Example: "Parties, politicians and PACs that want "less regulation" are, or represent, bullies. Those bullies want to bully everybody and want to take everything from the less powerful." Is that what you were trying to say?

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