Thread: The Hollow Girl
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Old 06-12-2007, 12:43 PM   #7
Sundae
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If it's not demeaning to the real writing, I submit a simple 4 line chorus and potential bridge:

You think you know her
Yes, do you just think you know her?
No, she says, no, no, no
Cos there’s nothing of her left to know

Check the shop window baby
You just
Check your reflection honey

Of course depends on the way the rhythm actually runs
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