Haiku Too

monster • Dec 5, 2011 9:31 pm
ones you wrote.

I wrote this for my swimmer girl who is happy and yet hurting from being back in the water after two weeks off....

A kite without air
Is pretty but meaningless.
Mermaids need water.
daynarankin • Dec 6, 2011 7:24 am
Beautiful!You have a knack for this.
glatt • Dec 6, 2011 8:28 am
That's actually pretty good, monster.

Leaves in the forest.
Thank God, they're not on my lawn.
Think I'll have a beer.

I don't really have the knack.
infinite monkey • Dec 6, 2011 8:32 am
She said "get the knack"
Sharona, so damn pushy
So 1980.
monster • Dec 6, 2011 8:33 am
Anything about beer works for me! :thumb:
Clodfobble • Dec 8, 2011 3:33 pm
Everyone we know
Vomiting, more vomiting
Upshot: no need to carpool.
glatt • Dec 8, 2011 3:36 pm
You should throw a few carriage returns in there at the end to distance your cooking blog from the image in my head.


Sorry for all the vomiting.
monster • Dec 8, 2011 10:19 pm
An upshot snuck in there and upfucked your haiku about upchucking!
ZenGum • Dec 9, 2011 2:18 am
How much up would an upfuck chuck, if an upfuck could chuck up?
monster • Apr 14, 2016 9:10 pm
Productivity
Tax returns during chemo
making lemonade
glatt • Apr 15, 2016 8:58 am
nice
DanaC • Apr 15, 2016 10:18 am
Doctor's appointment
Returning with medicine
in control again
Gravdigr • Apr 19, 2016 6:46 pm
Politics is bad
Good only for division
Facebook is as bad