Until the End of Time

JBKlyde • Nov 12, 2011 1:37 pm
I feel so un-forgiven,
But I know,
Jesus is Living,
Deep within my soul,
The Light is Just unknown,
I will not condone,
What I do not understand,
I'm just working out plan,
To make it to heaven,
Like a smoldering flame,
I'm not ashamed,
To speak my heart,
Maybe I'm not so smart
But I will express my art,
And Live my life,
Conciquences of sin,
Bend the realm of pretend,
I just want to love God,
Untill the end...

you finish this poem
DanaC • Nov 12, 2011 2:26 pm
No.


:p

I'd really like to see how you end your poems.
JBKlyde • Nov 12, 2011 2:56 pm
I finish my poems with "you finish this poem"...

it could be a lot of fun if you tried///
Griff • Nov 12, 2011 3:00 pm
so I forgive myself
and begin.
Sundae • Nov 12, 2011 3:54 pm
Come What May
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JBKlyde • Nov 12, 2011 4:36 pm
That's a bit dramatic sundae.. I like drama.. and griff.. I think your right sometimes you have to forgive your self before you can move on....

anyone else wanna give it a try...