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04-13-2008, 05:48 PM | #16 |
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
04-13-2008, 07:41 PM | #17 |
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I'll nominate (or second?) DanaC, for Manchester Dreaming.
Sun_Sparkz had some pretty good poetry, but I don't think she's posted anything lately. |
04-13-2008, 08:07 PM | #18 |
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I'm out.
couldn't last a night.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
04-13-2008, 08:15 PM | #19 |
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Brianna, look ... 7,000 posts.
You can't back out. You're a great poetess. |
04-13-2008, 08:38 PM | #20 |
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what the fuck is that supposed to mean?
if you're out, I'll toss the whole thing. and give the award to aliantha.
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04-13-2008, 08:49 PM | #21 |
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I don't think it should be a nomination thread but a participation thread.
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04-13-2008, 08:51 PM | #22 |
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I write only for fun. It's nothing, none of it. I write for 2nd graders, which is fine and fun, but it's no great art. It's only to get them to think. I have a prof that I actually LOATHE; he's a published, accomplished poet and I hate everything he's written. He was there when SS boots threatened his family but yet....he still makes the poem motherfucking boring. His poems suck. a lot.
we were going over a really sexy stanza in a poem (Cherrylog Road) where the guy, who wants to score with the girl, says: I held her and held her and held her, Convoyed at terrific speed By the stalled, dreaming traffic around us, So the blacksnake, stiff With inaction, curved back Into life, and hunted the mouse And Professor,in his sixties, well aquainted with sex, refused to discuss this stanza as he was "afraid' mothers, fathers, and faculity would find it "offensive." what-a-douche. he shouldn't be teaching poetry let alone write it. end rant.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
04-13-2008, 10:47 PM | #23 |
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Yeah, I really like Cherrylog Road. But I always thought it was about racing cars on back roads.
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04-14-2008, 11:54 AM | #24 |
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nevermind this nonsense. wouldnt have been that much fun anyway
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04-14-2008, 11:58 AM | #25 |
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Lj, I have an unimaginable fear of rejection. I can only write stuff if it doesn't matter. that's my big secret (that everyone knows, anyway). I think it WOULD be fun but I can't compete with others. I have a very fragile sense of self as it is!! I do poems for fun--coz they make me smile or laugh, not because I can 'write' them. I didn't mean to piss on your parade. that's two for me with you---just ignore me. I'll get better.
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
04-14-2008, 02:14 PM | #26 |
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meh.....
competetive poetry is probably a bad concept.
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04-14-2008, 03:46 PM | #27 |
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competitive poetry is NOT a bad idea. it's what keeps poetry alive.
I think we need rules: a poet must make use of the according: cunnilingus, french kissing, rimjob. make THAT into a poem, you godless amatuers, and then we will talk!!
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In Barrie's play and novel, the roles of fairies are brief: they are allies to the Lost Boys, the source of fairy dust and ...They are portrayed as dangerous, whimsical and extremely clever but quite hedonistic. "Shall I give you a kiss?" Peter asked and, jerking an acorn button off his coat, solemnly presented it to her. —James Barrie Wimminfolk they be tricksy. - ZenGum |
04-14-2008, 03:52 PM | #28 |
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the omission of 'felatio' from that list is quietly shrieking in my mind's ear.
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04-14-2008, 08:13 PM | #29 | |
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Quote:
aaaahhhh slurplr slup slup slurple ew, you have a pube in your teeth Oh, OH oooh uh uh uh uh.........
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04-14-2008, 10:35 PM | #30 |
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Though you have no eyes
And your face is a slit, You do have thighs And epic pink lips We'll lay here for days, My tongue planted deep In the swamp-like haze That swells as you weep When juices run out, Your caverns well fed, I'll move to the mouth On the back of your head
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