Politically Correct

[xoxoxoBruce]

The New Yorker has this politically correct version of Lord Of The Flies.

By the time Ralph finished blowing the conch, a large crowd had formed. “Well, then,” he said, clearing his throat. “First rule: we can’t have everyone talking at once.” Jack was on his feet. “We’ll have rules!” he yelled excitedly. “Lots of rules!” Ralph explained, “We need to have ‘hands up,’ like at school. Then I’ll pass the conch.” “Conch?” someone asked. “That’s what this shell’s called,” Ralph said. “I’ll give the conch to the next person to speak. He can hold it while he’s speaking. And he won’t be interrupted, except by me.”

“Just because we’re stranded doesn’t give you the right to use non-inclusive language,” Jack said. The littluns muttered in assent. “Uh, O.K.,” Ralph said. “So he or she can hold this conch when he or she is …” “He or she,” a littlun cried, “imposes a binary view of sexuality that excludes the gender-non-conforming.” “I feel unsafe!” Percival whimpered. “O.K.,” Ralph said. “During assembly, any person who holds the conch—”

“Excuse me,” Roger began, “remind us again why you get to interrupt us even if you don’t have the conch?” “Because I’m the chief,” Ralph said. “I was chosen.” “By whom?” “By you.” “I didn’t vote for you,” Roger said, with a frown. “We had a vote. The majority rules.” “Oh, that’s brilliant—the majority,” Jack scoffed. The littluns tittered. “If anything, that means you have even less of a right to interrupt than we do!” Jack faced the others. “If you agree with me, wiggle your fingers.” They wiggled their fingers.

“Look, I’m trying to get us rescued by the grownups,” Ralph said, gesturing toward a plane that had been circling the island for some time, and now seemed to be flying away. “You are speaking from a position of privilege,” Jack said, “so you have no right to criticize us or tell us what to do.”
“Uh-uh,” Piggy interjected. “My auntie is a constitutional-law professor at Staffordshire. She says that … ” “Sucks to your auntie,” Jack snapped. “Fatty!” The littluns giggled.

“I’m not fat,” Piggy whined. “I am a person of size.” “It’s a fair point,” Roger said. “Can we even call Piggy Piggy?” “I suppose it depends,” Jack said. “Is it glandular?” “No,” Piggy replied, sadly. “Are there oppressive or systemic social factors involved? Are you poor?” Roger whispered to Jack, “You’re supposed to say, Are you experiencing poverty?” "Right. Are you experiencing poverty, Piggy?” “Right now I am.” Jack went on, “But were you when you became … a person of size?” “No.” “Then sucks to you, Fatty.”

“Everyone, please!” Ralph shouted. “This is important. If a ship comes near the island, it may not notice us. We must make smoke on top of the mountain. We must make a fire.” “Mansplain the world to us,” Jack crowed, “oh wise, almighty white cisgendered hetero upper-class man.”
The littluns wiggled their fingers. “Oh, keep your hair on,” Ralph said.
“Microaggression!” a littlun cried. “My sister has alopecia.”

“Look, everyone,” Ralph said. “The sun is going down. We need to organize a party to go out in search of food.” “We should hunt!” Jack said. “Kill the pig! Cut her throat! Spill her blood!” They looked at him. “It’s not necessarily sexist if the pig represents oligarchical capitalism,” Jack added. “It’s certainly insensitive to vegans.” “Does pork have gluten in it?” a frightened littlun mewled.

Suddenly, a naval vessel appeared in the distance. A dinghy dropped into the sea; a small team of sailors climbed into it and paddled toward the island. The boys regarded them warily as they landed on the beach. “Are you the boys who need to be rescued?” an officer shouted. “Why is he screaming at us?” Percival cried. “I feel very unsafe!” “Some of us identify as gender-questioning,” Jack called back to the officer. “And we reject your Eurocentric imposition of the jungle-rescue narrative.” “No, please! Save us!” Ralph yelled, rushing to the officer. “Save us!” “Er, see, here’s the thing,” the officer said, backing away. “I’m going to have to radio back to my supervisors to make sure I’m following the proper protocols for dealing with self-identified indigenous populations before I can do anything.” They stared at him. He shrugged. “Or else we’ll just get killed on Twitter.”

The dinghy motored off. Then the ship. The boys were alone again. Ralph was afraid. “The tide is coming in,” he said. “It’s getting dark! We need to build a shelter. We need to move to higher ground!” “Sucks to higher ground!” Jack said triumphantly, even though a large python had begun coiling itself around his leg. “The tide is a mindless instrument of patriarchal violence!” “I feel unsafe!” Percival cried, one final time, as he was swept out to sea.
“And another thing,” Jack said as he was being eaten by the snake and also a large boar. “This conch of yours. It’s clearly vaginal, but you’re using it as some sort of musical instrument to dominate us. That’s extremely problematic.
“But, by all means, ignore me,” he said to Ralph, who by then had died. “I’m just trying to make this a safe place.”

I don't like this any more than I like changing socially sensitive words in Mark Twain's books, not because I'm old and resistant to change... which is true, but because it gets awkward reading it. I suppose if each character had spoken the politically correct way from the get go, it would be smoother. But I would still object to retro-editing existing books... because I'm old and resistant to change.

[fargon]

Originally Posted by xoxoxoBruce

The New Yorker has this politically correct version of Lord Of The Flies.


But I would still object to retro-editing existing books... because I'm old and resistant to change.

Yup

[elSicomoro]

I've noticed similar things done to Tom & Jerry cartoons. I don't know how much of that has been done to the Looney Tunes ones, if at all. I can understand that, so long as they are left intact for older folks.