Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 7

skysidhe · 09-10-2007, 08:10 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HungLikeJesus

Is that anything like a scratching post?

hehehe nice metaphor. I think I like you sir.

a true poet you are

monster · 09-10-2007, 08:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by skysidhe

My ditty was about you monster. You probably couldn't tell. I know it sucks.

I'm sorry, dear sky, of course I could tell,
but i'm up to my eyeballs in all kinds of hell,
and I was so flattered
my speech it was battered
given the day I've had, that's prolly just as well.....

skysidhe · 09-10-2007, 08:24 PM

lol

DanaC · 09-11-2007, 12:50 AM

Quote:

this is a long fucking post

Yep. Seemed important at the time :P

Sundae · 09-11-2007, 11:22 AM

The pretty young lady lady who did my nails
Didn't want to take her time
Brrrrrrr went the sander in her hand
Red went the skin on mine

She looked at the offending digit
And made a little soothing sound
Was she admitting she was at fault?
Or trying to heal the wound?

The owner redid my nails in the end
Berating her in Korean
I think her reply to him may have been
"It was like that when I got here!"

I like to think when she went home
And told of her day much later
She resentfully said that she was blamed
For a lady with stigmata

lumberjim · 09-11-2007, 12:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by skysidhe

this is a long fucking post

more importantly, it's a long fucking post about lj.

DanaC · 09-12-2007, 05:43 PM

SG that's awesome!

Elspode · 09-16-2007, 12:50 AM

Imagine that you are about to sleep alone again
For the fourth night, or the sixth, or the first.
Imagine that the wolves come to tear away at your soul
Each moment that you lie alone in your sheets.

Then imagine that you will never be alone again.

The wolves will still be there, eyes glowing at the fringe of your awareness.

BigV · 09-23-2007, 01:43 PM

you're coalescing

dream stuff gathering substance
wispy swirls of desire

unseen but perceived
calling to my nerves

compelling me

SamIam · 09-24-2007, 01:01 PM

Nice one BigV!

Today my car made it 16 miles in
and 16 miles back
to the nearest town
on a whif of gas.
Scents can compel memories
like nothing else -
so they say.
My Toyota remembered the muddy ruts
between here and there, and
drifted home carrying the smell
of autumn's rain.

Flint · 09-24-2007, 01:19 PM

devoured by starving wolves,
the skeleton still had breath
in it's bare-boned chest

it gasped out, in passing,
a last mistake, a last request,
before collapsing

Razzmatazz13 · 09-24-2007, 01:27 PM

[thinking out loud] I vote we (and by we I mean you guys, I'm not so poetic) all get together and publish "Teh Cellar Book Of Poems"

all proceeds fall directly to the tip jar?

or fund the cellar GTG...or hire someone else to do IOTD for UT? hmm...the possibilities are endless [/thinking out loud]

Jeboduuza · 09-24-2007, 05:47 PM

They say you donate to charity
But all you really are supporting is your fat ass and wallet
Cheap ass
American businessman

lumberjim · 09-24-2007, 05:59 PM

American businessman behind his desk
built his business to be the best
Your dad works for him, gets a check
and you think to judge him, you little prick.

Jeboduuza · 09-24-2007, 07:07 PM

ok, cock

09-16-2007, 12:50 AM	#98
Elspode When Do I Get Virtual Unreality? Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: Raytown, Missouri Posts: 12,719	Imagine that you are about to sleep alone again For the fourth night, or the sixth, or the first. Imagine that the wolves come to tear away at your soul Each moment that you lie alone in your sheets. Then imagine that you will never be alone again. The wolves will still be there, eyes glowing at the fringe of your awareness. __________________ "To those of you who are wearing ties, I think my dad would appreciate it if you took them off." - Robert Moog

09-23-2007, 01:43 PM	#99
BigV Goon Squad Leader Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Seattle Posts: 27,063	you're coalescing dream stuff gathering substance wispy swirls of desire unseen but perceived calling to my nerves compelling me __________________ Be Just and Fear Not.

09-24-2007, 01:19 PM	#101
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	devoured by starving wolves, the skeleton still had breath in it's bare-boned chest it gasped out, in passing, a last mistake, a last request, before collapsing __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

09-24-2007, 01:27 PM	#102
Razzmatazz13 Vicariously, I live... Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: USA Posts: 1,221	[thinking out loud] I vote we (and by we I mean you guys, I'm not so poetic) all get together and publish "Teh Cellar Book Of Poems" all proceeds fall directly to the tip jar? or fund the cellar GTG...or hire someone else to do IOTD for UT? hmm...the possibilities are endless [/thinking out loud] __________________ I have some people I need to have smoted. ~ SteveDallas

09-24-2007, 05:47 PM	#103
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	They say you donate to charity But all you really are supporting is your fat ass and wallet Cheap ass American businessman __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

09-10-2007, 08:24 PM	#93
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	lol

09-11-2007, 11:22 AM	#95
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	The pretty young lady lady who did my nails Didn't want to take her time Brrrrrrr went the sander in her hand Red went the skin on mine She looked at the offending digit And made a little soothing sound Was she admitting she was at fault? Or trying to heal the wound? The owner redid my nails in the end Berating her in Korean I think her reply to him may have been "It was like that when I got here!" I like to think when she went home And told of her day much later She resentfully said that she was blamed For a lady with stigmata

09-12-2007, 05:43 PM	#97
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	SG that's awesome!

09-24-2007, 01:01 PM	#100
SamIam Registered User Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Not here Posts: 2,655	Nice one BigV! Today my car made it 16 miles in and 16 miles back to the nearest town on a whif of gas. Scents can compel memories like nothing else - so they say. My Toyota remembered the muddy ruts between here and there, and drifted home carrying the smell of autumn's rain.

09-24-2007, 05:59 PM	#104
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	American businessman behind his desk built his business to be the best Your dad works for him, gets a check and you think to judge him, you little prick. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

09-24-2007, 07:07 PM	#105
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	ok, cock __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

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