Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 3

jester · 07-20-2007, 10:46 AM

It's raining today
and I don't mind
I know tomorrow
the sun will begin to shine

Your not here
and that's ok
I like being by myself
it gives me time to think

Shawnee123 · 07-20-2007, 11:03 AM

Ketchup in my cleavage
Ketchup in my cleavage
Why oh why is there ketchup in my cleavage?

It rolled off my fry
Took off on the fly
And now I ask why
Is there ketchup in my cleavage?

Could it just be fate
Saying I shouldn't've ate
But the fry tasted great 'cept for
Ketchup in my cleavage.

I guess I shouldn't care
Because the Big Guy upstairs
Made it miss my outerwear
That ketchup in my cleavage.

S'pose I'll take a clue
That fries ain't no stew
Next time I won't do
No ketchup in my cleavage.

HungLikeJesus · 07-20-2007, 11:45 AM

Pictures, Shawnee, where are the Pictures?

Words alone don't tell the whole story.

Shawnee123 · 07-20-2007, 12:12 PM

LOL...was hoping for something like:

Wish I had a fry
Cause hey, I'm just a guy
And I'd sure like to try
That ketchup in your cleavage.

DanaC · 07-20-2007, 12:15 PM

hahahahaha sweet

kerosene · 07-20-2007, 02:49 PM

I love that, Shawnee! It made me laugh.

Shawnee123 · 07-20-2007, 03:17 PM

Thanks Dana and case. I'm not sure where that came from, but it was fun writing it. Goofy stuff!

HungLikeJesus · 07-20-2007, 04:23 PM

I was going to say something like:

You got catsup on my cleavage!
You got cleavage on my catsup!
Two great tastes that go great together.

But I thought that that might be rude.

freshnesschronic · 07-21-2007, 02:24 PM

Harry Potter in my hands
Wishing he would make a stand
Vanquish Voldy finally
Until then I will follow he
Through the pages, by his side
Wand in hand, stride by stride
When at least the final page appears
And hearing things I don't want to hear
The book is done, the story told
And Harry Potter, my heart has stole

Sundae · 07-21-2007, 02:54 PM

You're twisted into in my DNA
Everything from my skin down aches for you
Would an X-Ray show your shadowy presence
Lurking under my bones?
Are you here in my chest
While my breast burns for your touch?
The very water in my pressured brain
Or sprouting fine hairs in my lungs?

Your absence is killing me,
Hurry up and introduce yourself, please.

freshnesschronic · 08-07-2007, 12:47 AM

Daily drivings make me think
About what I'm supposed to do
And then I lose track
Of what I should be doing
And then I wonder
If I should be doing that thing at all

DucksNuts · 08-07-2007, 01:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sundae Girl

You're twisted into in my DNA
Everything from my skin down aches for you
Would an X-Ray show your shadowy presence
Lurking under my bones?
Are you here in my chest
While my breast burns for your touch?
The very water in my pressured brain
Or sprouting fine hairs in my lungs?

Your absence is killing me,
Hurry up and introduce yourself, please.

Wow SG - I just read this....its awesome

08-07-2007, 01:18 AM

In this deep dark hot
I burn
Crawling agony
Black piss
Wretched skin
The thing you think you love
is gone
an aching husk
here
calls for you
to love me
back
to
life
again
worthlessly

Shawnee123 · 08-07-2007, 10:25 AM

We weave
Fibers of grief and glee and
Pain and pleasure and
Vexation and constancy.

We twist
Licorice sticks of tribulation and fortune and
Affliction and substance and
Torment and mirth.

We writhe
In motions of love and hate and
Hope and despair and
Tolerance and prejudice.

Deuce · 08-07-2007, 02:35 PM

What a cruel trick parents play on their children.
Birthing them, nurturing them, raising them, teaching them.
Encouraging them, challenging them, cheering them.
Misleading them.

"It will be all right." when it is broken.
"You can do it." when you can't.
"I know, I know." when I don't .
Lies.

"I love you."
The only truth.

07-20-2007, 11:03 AM	#32
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	Ketchup in my cleavage Ketchup in my cleavage Why oh why is there ketchup in my cleavage? It rolled off my fry Took off on the fly And now I ask why Is there ketchup in my cleavage? Could it just be fate Saying I shouldn't've ate But the fry tasted great 'cept for Ketchup in my cleavage. I guess I shouldn't care Because the Big Guy upstairs Made it miss my outerwear That ketchup in my cleavage. S'pose I'll take a clue That fries ain't no stew Next time I won't do No ketchup in my cleavage. __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

07-20-2007, 11:45 AM	#33
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	Pictures, Shawnee, where are the Pictures? Words alone don't tell the whole story. __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

07-20-2007, 12:12 PM	#34
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	LOL...was hoping for something like: Wish I had a fry Cause hey, I'm just a guy And I'd sure like to try That ketchup in your cleavage. __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

07-20-2007, 03:17 PM	#37
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	Thanks Dana and case. I'm not sure where that came from, but it was fun writing it. Goofy stuff! __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

07-20-2007, 04:23 PM	#38
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	I was going to say something like: You got catsup on my cleavage! You got cleavage on my catsup! Two great tastes that go great together. But I thought that that might be rude. __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

07-20-2007, 10:46 AM	#31
jester why so serious Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 1,712	It's raining today and I don't mind I know tomorrow the sun will begin to shine Your not here and that's ok I like being by myself it gives me time to think

07-20-2007, 12:15 PM	#35
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	hahahahaha sweet

07-20-2007, 02:49 PM	#36
kerosene Touring the facilities Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: The plains of Colorado Posts: 3,476	I love that, Shawnee! It made me laugh.

07-21-2007, 02:24 PM	#39
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	Harry Potter in my hands Wishing he would make a stand Vanquish Voldy finally Until then I will follow he Through the pages, by his side Wand in hand, stride by stride When at least the final page appears And hearing things I don't want to hear The book is done, the story told And Harry Potter, my heart has stole

07-21-2007, 02:54 PM	#40
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	You're twisted into in my DNA Everything from my skin down aches for you Would an X-Ray show your shadowy presence Lurking under my bones? Are you here in my chest While my breast burns for your touch? The very water in my pressured brain Or sprouting fine hairs in my lungs? Your absence is killing me, Hurry up and introduce yourself, please. __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac

08-07-2007, 12:47 AM	#41
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	Daily drivings make me think About what I'm supposed to do And then I lose track Of what I should be doing And then I wonder If I should be doing that thing at all

08-07-2007, 01:18 AM	#43
rkzenrage Guest Posts: n/a	In this deep dark hot I burn Crawling agony Black piss Wretched skin The thing you think you love is gone an aching husk here calls for you to love me back to life again worthlessly

08-07-2007, 10:25 AM	#44
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	We weave Fibers of grief and glee and Pain and pleasure and Vexation and constancy. We twist Licorice sticks of tribulation and fortune and Affliction and substance and Torment and mirth. We writhe In motions of love and hate and Hope and despair and Tolerance and prejudice. __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

08-07-2007, 02:35 PM	#45
Deuce Pesky Pugalist [sp] Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 191	What a cruel trick parents play on their children. Birthing them, nurturing them, raising them, teaching them. Encouraging them, challenging them, cheering them. Misleading them. "It will be all right." when it is broken. "You can do it." when you can't. "I know, I know." when I don't . Lies. "I love you." The only truth.

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