The Cellar  

Go Back   The Cellar > Cellar-related > Archives > Lumberjim's Office > Creative Writing
FAQ Community Calendar Today's Posts Search

Creative Writing Find your muse

Reply
 
Thread Tools Display Modes
Old 08-11-2004, 06:01 PM   #1
Trilby
Slattern of the Swail
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 15,654
haiku II

Silly butterfly
Hustles wings to a gallop
Rest yourself awhile
Trilby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 06:44 PM   #2
Sun_Sparkz
Has Body Temperature
 
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: I come from a land downunder
Posts: 1,105
oh cool i remember this!

its two syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables right?
__________________
We'll never be as young as we are right now
Sun_Sparkz is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 07:43 PM   #3
Trilby
Slattern of the Swail
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 15,654
It's five/seven/five----it's easy and fun--try it!
If you're not sure, count the syllables out
Sil-ly But-ter-fly (that's five)--get it?
Trilby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 09:51 PM   #4
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
This is my weblog,
There are millions of others,
But this one is mine
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 10:44 PM   #5
Clodfobble
UNDER CONDITIONAL MITIGATION
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Austin, TX
Posts: 20,012
Everquest widows
Have nothing on me. It's called
City of Heroes.
Clodfobble is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 10:51 PM   #6
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
Trust ye not Evel,
Says he will jump the canyon,
Ends up in the drink

This recap is for Brianna, because she liked it so much:

A celery stalk,
Has negative calories,
You can look it up
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 11:07 PM   #7
Trilby
Slattern of the Swail
 
Join Date: Jul 2004
Posts: 15,654
Yay! Thanks NBN--you're a true haiku master!
Trilby is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 11:09 PM   #8
Clodfobble
UNDER CONDITIONAL MITIGATION
 
Join Date: Mar 2004
Location: Austin, TX
Posts: 20,012
You forgot the last line!

"Yay! Thanks NBN--
You're a true haiku master!
Older men are hot."
Clodfobble is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 11:15 PM   #9
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
Loving my neighbor,
Has become more of a chore,
Again the dog barks
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 11:24 PM   #10
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
My pipe is busted,
It's always the same story,
Dumbass dropped the bong
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-11-2004, 11:30 PM   #11
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
I miss fellatio,
Though I did not know her well,
I hope she comes back
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2004, 12:06 AM   #12
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
I met some roosters,
All the cocks carried a comb,
Do they use Brylcreem?
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2004, 12:13 AM   #13
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
'Hood associates,
Don't dig my hi-growin' weed,
I shot the sheriff
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2004, 12:14 AM   #14
triestemoi
Civil Civilian
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Northwest
Posts: 33
Red geraniums
Summer's long, hot days stretch on
till fall's chill arrives
triestemoi is offline   Reply With Quote
Old 08-12-2004, 12:34 AM   #15
Nothing But Net
Professor
 
Join Date: Sep 2001
Location: Spring, Texas
Posts: 1,481
Wacky Iraqi,
Is that something you can smoke?
Yeah, if I have to
Nothing But Net is offline   Reply With Quote
Reply


Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)
 

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On

Forum Jump

All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:49 PM.


Powered by: vBulletin Version 3.8.1
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.