03-17-2005, 06:28 PM | #19 |
Complex Simpleton
Join Date: Mar 2005
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Hmm, I wouldn't know what that one would be about, but, it's good, I'm not sure I can say that I like it, but I can't deny, that it's pretty good. lol. Here's something that I wrote after seeing the moon again.
Standing there so quiet, so honest, so loving Her pail white face haunts me so She is devious but you can trust her, trust not that face that looks so trusting So tranquil and modest, she looks so honest Her spell entrances you and you'll never be free Midnight wonder her pail white face will be all that you see Curse her, damn her for your misfortune She stares into your face so innocent still Blame her, she is there, she saw all, mistake, mishap, misfortune She'll take you, she'll do all against your will Oh so clever is she, leave now and will still be all that you see. It's not finished, I started a new stanza, but I'm not done with them, so stay tuned for the rest. |
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