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Old 03-17-2005, 06:28 PM   #19
Mad_Hatter
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Hmm, I wouldn't know what that one would be about, but, it's good, I'm not sure I can say that I like it, but I can't deny, that it's pretty good. lol. Here's something that I wrote after seeing the moon again.

Standing there so quiet, so honest, so loving
Her pail white face haunts me so
She is devious but you can trust her, trust not that face that looks so trusting
So tranquil and modest, she looks so honest
Her spell entrances you and you'll never be free
Midnight wonder her pail white face will be all that you see

Curse her, damn her for your misfortune
She stares into your face so innocent still
Blame her, she is there, she saw all, mistake, mishap, misfortune
She'll take you, she'll do all against your will
Oh so clever is she, leave now and will still be all that you see.

It's not finished, I started a new stanza, but I'm not done with them, so stay tuned for the rest.
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