If I fell in LOVE again..

[JBKlyde]

If I fell in love again,
You'd fall from the heavens,
Right into my arms,
If I fell in love again,
This realm of pretend,
Would evolve into a garden,
A garden of everlasting life,
Where pain would cest to exist,
And our love would presist,
Like an endless sea of forgiveness,
Where everything flowed,
Like a meadow of flowers,
Reflecting the sun,
Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,
The wind would blow like,
A mysterious myth,
And when we kissed,
Time would pass like,
The sounding of a clock,
We'd pray to God,
That it would never stop,
Weather or Not,
Our Love was true,
Would not be an issue,
It would just be me and you,
In Heaven doing what lovers do,
But Heaven seems so far away,
And I have no Idea what to say,
So when the night comes,
I'll just give it away,
The truth is that pretending,
Just isn't a good way.

[DanaC]

Oh I really like this!

Seriously impressed.

[wolf]

I also. I'm not a big poetry fancier, but that paints a picture.

[DanaC]

There are some lovely lines there.

Like an endless sea of forgiveness,
Where everything flowed,
Like a meadow of flowers,
Reflecting the sun,
Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,
The wind would blow like,
A mysterious myth,
And when we kissed,
Time would pass like,
The sounding of a clock,

That is just gorgeous.

[JBKlyde]

Thank You Thank You.. I'm trying to get my grove back... I'm not very good at writing love poetry. I ship wrecked my self with some of the stuff I wrote when I was younger.. but hey it's never 2 late 2 turn around///

[JBKlyde]

Day time would be continuous,
And night would never come,

Do you think that is unamerican seeings how we have all those stars on the flag or am I Describeing Africa??

[JBKlyde]

This realm of pretend,
Would evolve into a garden,

and that line seems a little unchristian seeings how christian's don't believe in evolution

qcc?

[BigV]

Originally Posted by JBKlyde

and that line seems a little unchristian seeings how christian's don't believe in evolution

qcc?

Certainly there are some people who don't believe in evolution. And some of those people are christians. But JBK, I assure you, that there are plenty of christians that do believe in evolution. Disbelief in evolution is *not* a requirement to be a christian.