Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 19

monster · 03-01-2008, 07:48 PM

If you don't get your honey
Diamonds for Christmas
You are a loser.
She will leave you.

If you don't get your cherub
Diamonds on Valentines
You will suffer
She will hate you

If you don't get your darling
Diamonds for Mothers Day
You're a bad father
She will shun you

When does it end?
All this spend spend spend?

What will come next?

Do we need emeralds for Paddy's day
Jet and Obsidian for MLK
Citrine and Sapphires when Michigan play
Knuckle-dusters for when you mother stays?

Oops

And when we are all spent
Do we give up gems for Lent?

Clodfobble · 03-01-2008, 08:57 PM

I kept waiting for the "you should buy your sweetheart some scrip instead" punchline.

monster · 03-01-2008, 09:02 PM

I'm saving that for April Fool's Day

DanaC · 03-02-2008, 12:44 PM

Lena, I really liked that. Monster's too.

Spectacle · 03-03-2008, 02:31 AM

Do that thing you do.
Go and try something new.
You'd better find yourself a clue.
Success you must pursue.

Flint · 03-03-2008, 10:19 AM

big butt at the grocery store

we happen to be shopping
on the same aisles
for a little while
when I saw that butt
it made me smile
(in my pants)

what a jiggle
I would pummel that
if I had a chance to hit some'a that

spit on your butthole and stick my thumb in
I need me a big butt to cum in

Trilby · 03-03-2008, 11:02 AM

you're awesome, Flint.

that's beautiful.... (cries a little)

Saphyre · 03-03-2008, 01:33 PM

in, around, over and under
limbs and lips, flesh meets soul
twining as two, entangled as one
sound of twin hearts pounding in time
as they fall off the edge
together

Flint · 03-03-2008, 02:23 PM

silky dress clings to your cheeks
weak in the knees, I need to freak
lick your sweaty ass-crack for a week

it's sexual intercourse of which I speak

lumberjim · 03-03-2008, 02:38 PM

dewd. get a grippie
you're obsessing like a hippy
loves a tree
you need some P

ussy

Giant Salamander · 03-03-2008, 03:30 PM

Your words, dirty-hot
I'll think of them now
With microwaved glass,
Myself I will plow
Rimming and rutting,
Indeed, you're quite deft
Between your legs, nothing
But a gigantic "F"

Such a variety of effective prose in this wonderful, upstanding thread.

Spectacle · 03-08-2008, 06:50 PM

as i lay on the bed
waiting to go to sleep
i feel my thoughts dancing in my head

sometimes i wish i could turn back time
to see what i looked like
when things were fine

lushchocolateswirl · 03-08-2008, 07:28 PM

Of all the things I needed to do
Today I sit here thinking of you
About the way we used to be
the different ways you looked at me
Behind the face I could see the heart
Mine was cracking but yours was smart

One day, oh yes, I'll fly away
It will be my fault, I know you'll say
but I've made choices and here's another
I don't want to be, anymore, your mother.

But maybe you'll be the one to leave
and sit me here with my thoughts to grieve
I guess I'll sigh with what may come
but at least 'I' didn't need a gun.

So what you want from me is compliance
and not what you like to call 'defiance'
But listen up and listen good
I'm standing where I've always stood.

I'll not let you bring me down
Especially when there are people around
You shout and shout but what's even worse
You think that I am your curse.

So go tell your friends about the dragon
"eh one day, she'll go on the wagon"
But i sit here and be quiet and still
because I know it was you who made me ill.

Meh? it's off the top of my head. but i think it's readable.

lumberjim · 03-08-2008, 10:04 PM

so stop for a drink at a bar
then get right back in your car
and go buy a hello kitty guitar
a rocker is not what you are

freshnesschronic · 03-12-2008, 01:07 PM

hey girl
you came and went
it felt so right
my money you spent
after all these years
the things we've been through
it wasn't meant to be
but i did enjoy the sex too
maybe we'll get back together
maybe we will not
but the times that i had shared with you
will be certainly not forgot

03-01-2008, 07:48 PM	#271
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	If you don't get your honey Diamonds for Christmas You are a loser. She will leave you. If you don't get your cherub Diamonds on Valentines You will suffer She will hate you If you don't get your darling Diamonds for Mothers Day You're a bad father She will shun you When does it end? All this spend spend spend? What will come next? Do we need emeralds for Paddy's day Jet and Obsidian for MLK Citrine and Sapphires when Michigan play Knuckle-dusters for when you mother stays? Oops And when we are all spent Do we give up gems for Lent? __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

03-01-2008, 09:02 PM	#273
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	I'm saving that for April Fool's Day __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

03-03-2008, 02:31 AM	#275
Spectacle Observing the Wine Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 85	Do that thing you do. Go and try something new. You'd better find yourself a clue. Success you must pursue. __________________ I see.

03-03-2008, 10:19 AM	#276
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	big butt at the grocery store we happen to be shopping on the same aisles for a little while when I saw that butt it made me smile (in my pants) what a jiggle I would pummel that if I had a chance to hit some'a that spit on your butthole and stick my thumb in I need me a big butt to cum in __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

03-03-2008, 01:33 PM	#278
Saphyre Dedicated WoWer Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: San Fernando Valley, So. Cali Posts: 35	in, around, over and under limbs and lips, flesh meets soul twining as two, entangled as one sound of twin hearts pounding in time as they fall off the edge together __________________ You used to captivate me, by your resonating light, now I'm bound by the life you left behind Your face, it haunts my once pleasant dreams, your voice, it chased away all the sanity in me

03-01-2008, 08:57 PM	#272
Clodfobble UNDER CONDITIONAL MITIGATION Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 20,012	I kept waiting for the "you should buy your sweetheart some scrip instead" punchline.

03-02-2008, 12:44 PM	#274
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Lena, I really liked that. Monster's too.

03-03-2008, 11:02 AM	#277
Trilby Slattern of the Swail Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 15,654	you're awesome, Flint. that's beautiful.... (cries a little)

03-03-2008, 02:23 PM	#279
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	silky dress clings to your cheeks weak in the knees, I need to freak lick your sweaty ass-crack for a week it's sexual intercourse of which I speak __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

03-03-2008, 02:38 PM	#280
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	dewd. get a grippie you're obsessing like a hippy loves a tree you need some P ussy __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

03-03-2008, 03:30 PM	#281
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Your words, dirty-hot I'll think of them now With microwaved glass, Myself I will plow Rimming and rutting, Indeed, you're quite deft Between your legs, nothing But a gigantic "F" Such a variety of effective prose in this wonderful, upstanding thread. __________________ random artstuff

03-08-2008, 06:50 PM	#282
Spectacle Observing the Wine Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 85	as i lay on the bed waiting to go to sleep i feel my thoughts dancing in my head sometimes i wish i could turn back time to see what i looked like when things were fine __________________ I see.

03-08-2008, 07:28 PM	#283
lushchocolateswirl Hi just me Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 108	Of all the things I needed to do Today I sit here thinking of you About the way we used to be the different ways you looked at me Behind the face I could see the heart Mine was cracking but yours was smart One day, oh yes, I'll fly away It will be my fault, I know you'll say but I've made choices and here's another I don't want to be, anymore, your mother. But maybe you'll be the one to leave and sit me here with my thoughts to grieve I guess I'll sigh with what may come but at least 'I' didn't need a gun. So what you want from me is compliance and not what you like to call 'defiance' But listen up and listen good I'm standing where I've always stood. I'll not let you bring me down Especially when there are people around You shout and shout but what's even worse You think that I am your curse. So go tell your friends about the dragon "eh one day, she'll go on the wagon" But i sit here and be quiet and still because I know it was you who made me ill. Meh? it's off the top of my head. but i think it's readable. __________________ silence is golden , duct tape is silver

03-08-2008, 10:04 PM	#284
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	so stop for a drink at a bar then get right back in your car and go buy a hello kitty guitar a rocker is not what you are __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

03-12-2008, 01:07 PM	#285
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	hey girl you came and went it felt so right my money you spent after all these years the things we've been through it wasn't meant to be but i did enjoy the sex too maybe we'll get back together maybe we will not but the times that i had shared with you will be certainly not forgot

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