Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 18

Giant Salamander · 02-22-2008, 03:13 PM

Thanks Brianna. I'm glad my measured brain farts have a pleasant odor.

I like monster's Seuss tribute even more on the second read...

Giant Salamander · 02-22-2008, 03:38 PM

They tickle as they crawl inside
Tingling creeks beneath my skin -
I'd love to twitch until I pop;
I never should have let them in

Anxious ants crawl deeper still
Tendons darting, nerves are fried -
I'd love to run until I drop,
But endings are all
Paralyzed

Feed on worry, gorge on fear
Nests that droop beneath my eyes -
I'd love to sleep, and leave this place,
But marching echoes through the night

monster · 02-22-2008, 07:44 PM

thanks guys. It's for the school newsletter to promote the scrip fundraiser.

xiphos · 02-23-2008, 10:38 PM

A peaceful village deep in fright
Fear of slaughter in the night
another will attack again
time is irreversable, and night will never end!

As I draw near
mortals run in fear
no souls going to the sky
now its time for you to die!

Father, forgive me not
for I have sinned
I have no Remorse
and night will never end!

not about a village. about an insane man. It is acually the lyrics to one of my band's songs XD. It took me lik, 5 hours to write from my sick mind.

monster · 02-23-2008, 10:59 PM

Here I sit, a little drunk
Not much patience, for the punk
Who can't be bothered -trith be told-
To read posts more than 5 mins old

Flint · 02-23-2008, 11:04 PM

chocolate milk is for nincompoops
dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz.
leather boa, feather boots
dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz.
absolute
absinthe loot
absent sleuth
dingleshmootz.
dingleshmootz.
dingleshmootz.
dingleshmootz.

monster · 02-23-2008, 11:08 PM

beer is good
beer ia great
much beer needs
sleep in late

Giant Salamander · 02-25-2008, 02:08 PM

Raise my feet, bring them down
Ram rooftops into the ground
Old worlds' blood upon my lips
Impaled kings upon my crown

Spread my arms and crack the sky
Clamor of six billion cries
Homeworld breaks for the abyss
I breathe of stars and learn to fly

Viscous seas of starlit milk
Empty kingdoms choked with silt
Crown drifts soft through silent storms
Naked scalp is left to wilt

New star pulls me to its fringe
Wrap my arms around my shins
Close my eyes against the Vast
Sleep until new life begins

Flint · 02-25-2008, 03:57 PM

persimmons as portents of doom
mister zippy, clean your room
lookout's taint by microsoft
this ain't exact but it sure ain't not

Flint · 02-25-2008, 10:46 PM

I submit,
there's no rhyme or reason
to what you've been sayin'
to wit, it's murderin' season,
and I'll do the slayin'

Giant Salamander · 02-26-2008, 12:09 AM

Tastes quite unfriendly,
Though it surely is sweet;
Something like swallowing
Undercooked meat

Flint · 02-28-2008, 02:03 PM

I’m on a steep ladder
with a weak bladder
and you’re below me
so blow me, homie

Giant Salamander · 02-28-2008, 02:55 PM

You are not blamed
For dancing on skin
All of us sway
To the Monkey's din

Lena · 03-01-2008, 12:35 PM

I hear a roar
I know that sound
It's closer now
I'm not afraid
I see it now
That well known sight
a plane flying
in the pattern
I hear a roar
I know that sound
moving slower
another plane
taxiing now
to the gas tanks
I hear a roar
I know that sound
familiar here
at an airport

lumberjim · 03-01-2008, 01:19 PM

for just 40 cents a month
you could feed a family for a week
for just 40 cents a week
you could feed a family for a month
a family of 40 could feed
a family of 4 for just 4 days
for 4 dollars each
but fuck all this math,
lets go to the beach.

02-22-2008, 03:13 PM	#256
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Thanks Brianna. I'm glad my measured brain farts have a pleasant odor. I like monster's Seuss tribute even more on the second read... __________________ random artstuff

02-22-2008, 03:38 PM	#257
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	They tickle as they crawl inside Tingling creeks beneath my skin - I'd love to twitch until I pop; I never should have let them in Anxious ants crawl deeper still Tendons darting, nerves are fried - I'd love to run until I drop, But endings are all Paralyzed Feed on worry, gorge on fear Nests that droop beneath my eyes - I'd love to sleep, and leave this place, But marching echoes through the night __________________ random artstuff Last edited by Giant Salamander; 02-22-2008 at 03:45 PM. Reason: I took out a word for the sake of pacing. Guess it's not so spontaneous anymore.

02-22-2008, 07:44 PM	#258
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	thanks guys. It's for the school newsletter to promote the scrip fundraiser. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-23-2008, 10:59 PM	#260
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Here I sit, a little drunk Not much patience, for the punk Who can't be bothered -trith be told- To read posts more than 5 mins old __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-23-2008, 11:04 PM	#261
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	chocolate milk is for nincompoops dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz. leather boa, feather boots dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz. absolute absinthe loot absent sleuth dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz. dingleshmootz. __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-23-2008, 10:38 PM	#259
xiphos Bryan. Join Date: Dec 2007 Location: Jupiter, Florida Posts: 63	A peaceful village deep in fright Fear of slaughter in the night another will attack again time is irreversable, and night will never end! As I draw near mortals run in fear no souls going to the sky now its time for you to die! Father, forgive me not for I have sinned I have no Remorse and night will never end! not about a village. about an insane man. It is acually the lyrics to one of my band's songs XD. It took me lik, 5 hours to write from my sick mind.

02-23-2008, 11:08 PM	#262
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	beer is good beer ia great much beer needs sleep in late __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-25-2008, 02:08 PM	#263
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Raise my feet, bring them down Ram rooftops into the ground Old worlds' blood upon my lips Impaled kings upon my crown Spread my arms and crack the sky Clamor of six billion cries Homeworld breaks for the abyss I breathe of stars and learn to fly Viscous seas of starlit milk Empty kingdoms choked with silt Crown drifts soft through silent storms Naked scalp is left to wilt New star pulls me to its fringe Wrap my arms around my shins Close my eyes against the Vast Sleep until new life begins __________________ random artstuff

02-25-2008, 03:57 PM	#264
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	persimmons as portents of doom mister zippy, clean your room lookout's taint by microsoft this ain't exact but it sure ain't not __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-25-2008, 10:46 PM	#265
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	stuff like this just pops into my head I submit, there's no rhyme or reason to what you've been sayin' to wit, it's murderin' season, and I'll do the slayin' __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-26-2008, 12:09 AM	#266
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Tastes quite unfriendly, Though it surely is sweet; Something like swallowing Undercooked meat __________________ random artstuff

02-28-2008, 02:03 PM	#267
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	I’m on a steep ladder with a weak bladder and you’re below me so blow me, homie __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-28-2008, 02:55 PM	#268
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	You are not blamed For dancing on skin All of us sway To the Monkey's din __________________ random artstuff

03-01-2008, 12:35 PM	#269
Lena has-a one-a short-a leg-a Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Pacific Northwest Posts: 53	Everyday I hear a roar I know that sound It's closer now I'm not afraid I see it now That well known sight a plane flying in the pattern I hear a roar I know that sound moving slower another plane taxiing now to the gas tanks I hear a roar I know that sound familiar here at an airport

03-01-2008, 01:19 PM	#270
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	for just 40 cents a month you could feed a family for a week for just 40 cents a week you could feed a family for a month a family of 40 could feed a family of 4 for just 4 days for 4 dollars each but fuck all this math, lets go to the beach. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

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