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06-09-2013, 07:26 PM
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Not Suspicious, Merely Canadian
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End of Things
End of Things
breathe in, breathe out stretch, exult end of day rub caress luxuriate what is this something - what? hard alien wrong what? you know darkness smiles it comes to us all sweet air fragrance birds cry to heaven all is well rub caress what? oh my that’s big i’d be so scared if i were you thanks i feel so much better pink wallpaper pink gowns pink pink pink please i hate pink never mind there’s a problem komen never anticipated heart-shaped mass big cystic? no benign? no but it’s heart-shaped does love kill? sometimes biopsy today now come this way but wait i’m alone want it done or no yes please no please please please no stabbed stabbed stabbed stabbed stabbed stabbed done too much bleeding do you have a problem no i’m just dying on the inside stabbed through the heart my heart my enemy no one to call no one no one wait wait wait ring ring ring it’s cancer CANCER CANCER CANCER heart-shaped cancer hooray i knew you didn’t have to tell me why, why did you have to tell me i have cancer cancer cancer breathe in breathe out end of things
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06-09-2013, 10:23 PM
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yea that is really looking how I'm gonna be going out... I told my mom look I made a mistake, I'm gonna have to live with it for the rest of my life just let me live with it, if you want to help me get me the gum...
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06-10-2013, 05:36 AM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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This one gave me a shiver down my spine.
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06-10-2013, 03:16 PM
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I got shivers too, and it wasn't Dana's post that suggested that word to me.
uhhhh....
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06-10-2013, 05:43 PM
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Not Suspicious, Merely Canadian
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Well ... thank you. I haven't written anything for awhile and I've never put any poems out there for people to read. I appreciate the feedback.
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The greatness of a nation and its moral progress can be judged by the way its animals are treated. - Ghandi
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06-10-2013, 06:07 PM
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We have to go back, Kate!
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You're very talented.
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06-10-2013, 06:17 PM
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Glutton for Gluttony
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Agreed. I hope you'll share more, ortho. These are beautiful.
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