who could help me?

Eric · 04-19-2006, 06:57 AM

i am seeking a new job recently and prepare a English resume for foreign company.But i don't know if it is a normative English resume for a foreigner. could u help me?any suggistion would be high appreciative.

PS: thank xoxobruce spend much time to correct it first.

Resume

Work Experience:
　Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003, LED TECH Inc
Title - Automatic Equipment engineer ( had been an AE engineer for 3 months) and PE engineer.
Duties - Know the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD.
Recommend product changes to allow ease of manufacture.
Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems.
Effect disposition or rejection of material.
Provide assistance to all other departments.
Jul. 2003 - Present, Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc
Title - Manufacturing Engineer Director.
Duties - Managing manufacturing engineering standards on the production line.
Know thoroughly, ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards.
Document production methods and process improvements
Manage technicians
Quality control.
Arrange product testing.
Monitor the operators and operation of machines.
Monitor installation and alteration of equipment.
Purchase spare parts.
Lead and manage a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”.

Education:
　　1998 - July 2002 - Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry.
Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automatization
Member of the Student Council.

Computer Abilities:
　 Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD,
also solidworks, mechanical design software.

English Skills :
　　 Continually improving English skills, while working at Thomson, with 6 months of professional training.
I have a good command of reading and writing English, and have passed CET-4.

Summary :
　 Three years’ working experience with a Fortune 500 company.
Aggressive, independent and be able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment.
Amiable, can have good association between persons or groups.
Have coordination skills, teamwork spirit.
Studious nature and dedication are my greatest strengths.

Salary expectation: 6000RMB/Month (Guangzhou)

Eric · 04-19-2006, 07:13 AM

i rid off personal information.

skysidhe · 04-19-2006, 08:38 AM

I would google resume samples, templates or forms.

Many formats you can use in whatever word program you are using and print.

http://www.career.vt.edu/JOBSEARC/Resumes/formats.htm

http://jobsearchtech.about.com/od/re...l/aa070599.htm

xoxoxoBruce · 04-19-2006, 05:37 PM

I just fixed the spelling and gross grammer errors but I'm not up on resumes. I figured some of you people would be hip to the resume thing.
Besides, we want Eric to get a good job so he can give Billy a job where he can travel around taking great pictures of China for us.

04-20-2006, 11:53 AM

As it just so happens, I am trying to drum up some work online writing resumes for people, so I gave yours a quick try. You need to have a clearly stated employment goal at the top of your resume. I don't know what job you are applying for, so I just put in "Engineering Director." You can fill in whatever the actual job title is that you are hoping to get.

Generally, jobs are listed in reverse chronological order, and the use of the first person "I" is avoided. Its also important to list whatever achievements you accomplished at each of your jobs. I wasn't sure about your position(s) at your first place of employment, but it sounds as though they promoted you, so put that in.

Usually salary is negotiated when the job offer is made, so don't put down a desired salary on your resume.

Use "action" words like "implemented," "coordinated," "supervised."

Let me know if you find this revision useful and good luck!

*********************************

Objective: Engineering Director

Summary: Three years’ experience with a Fortune 500 company.
Aggressive, independent and able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment. Excellent teamwork and coordination skills. Proficient at learning new applications and methods.

Work Experience:

Manufacturing Engineer Director
Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc, Jul. 2003 - Present

Duties
Administer manufacturing engineering standards on the production line through thorough knowledge of ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards, document production methods and process improvements.
Manage technicians
Quality control.
Arrange product testing.
Superintend operation personnel and machinery.
Oversee installation and alteration of equipment.
Purchase spare parts.
Achievements
Directed and managed a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”.

Automatic Equipment Engineer
LED TECH Inc, Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003

Duties
Recommend product changes through expert knowledge of the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD; and facilitate equipment manufacturing.
Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems.
Effect disposition or rejection of material.
Provide assistance to all other departments.
Achievements
Promoted from PE engineer after 3 months.

Education:

Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automation, Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry, 2002.
- Member of the Student Council

Additional Training and Skills:

Computer Abilities:
Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD, also solidworks, mechanical design software.
English Skills:
Continually improving English skills - 6 months of professional training. Good command of written English. Completed CET-4.

References supplied upon request

*********************************

xoxoxoBruce · 04-20-2006, 10:44 PM

Thanks Mari, I questioned the "mechanistic design and Automatization", also.
Apparently those are the terms the school uses.

xoxoxoBruce · 04-21-2006, 06:29 AM

Eric, are you applying at an American company in China?

Eric · 04-23-2006, 07:10 AM

Thank all of you!
sky,i take much time to look these website u give me. very useful to me.
mary,thank you very much for correcting the resume and giving me such useful suggestion.thanks again.

Eric · 04-23-2006, 07:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xoxoxoBruce

Eric, are you applying at an American company in China?

yep,i apply a American company name " coleman" ,Do u know this company?
it produce outdoor equipment.

Happy Monkey · 04-23-2006, 09:15 AM

They make very popular stoves and lanterns. My guess is that most Boy Scout troops in the USA use Coleman lanterns.

xoxoxoBruce · 04-23-2006, 01:24 PM

Oh yes, Coleman is one of, if not the, largest camping gear manufacturers. I say the best known name in the business.
Eric, I've always relied on Coleman for quality products.....don't screw it up.

04-23-2006, 01:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eric

Thank all of you!
sky,i take much time to look these website u give me. very useful to me.
mary,thank you very much for correcting the resume and giving me such useful suggestion.thanks again.

You're welcome! Let us know if you get an interveiw, or better yet, get the job! Would that mean moving to the US or is it working for them in China?

I have lots of Coleman gear among my camping equipment. I wouldn't leave home without it! Good luck!

04-19-2006, 06:57 AM	#1
Eric know yourself Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: GD province China Posts: 86	who could help me? i am seeking a new job recently and prepare a English resume for foreign company.But i don't know if it is a normative English resume for a foreigner. could u help me?any suggistion would be high appreciative. PS: thank xoxobruce spend much time to correct it first. Resume Work Experience: 　Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003, LED TECH Inc Title - Automatic Equipment engineer ( had been an AE engineer for 3 months) and PE engineer. Duties - Know the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD. Recommend product changes to allow ease of manufacture. Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems. Effect disposition or rejection of material. Provide assistance to all other departments. Jul. 2003 - Present, Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc Title - Manufacturing Engineer Director. Duties - Managing manufacturing engineering standards on the production line. Know thoroughly, ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards. Document production methods and process improvements Manage technicians Quality control. Arrange product testing. Monitor the operators and operation of machines. Monitor installation and alteration of equipment. Purchase spare parts. Lead and manage a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”. Education: 　　1998 - July 2002 - Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry. Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automatization Member of the Student Council. Computer Abilities: 　 Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD, also solidworks, mechanical design software. English Skills : 　　 Continually improving English skills, while working at Thomson, with 6 months of professional training. I have a good command of reading and writing English, and have passed CET-4. Summary : 　 Three years’ working experience with a Fortune 500 company. Aggressive, independent and be able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment. Amiable, can have good association between persons or groups. Have coordination skills, teamwork spirit. Studious nature and dedication are my greatest strengths. Salary expectation: 6000RMB/Month (Guangzhou) __________________ To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild of flower. Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in and hour --William Blake

04-19-2006, 07:13 AM	#2
Eric know yourself Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: GD province China Posts: 86	i rid off personal information. __________________ To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild of flower. Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in and hour --William Blake

04-19-2006, 05:37 PM	#4
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	I just fixed the spelling and gross grammer errors but I'm not up on resumes. I figured some of you people would be hip to the resume thing. Besides, we want Eric to get a good job so he can give Billy a job where he can travel around taking great pictures of China for us. __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

04-20-2006, 11:53 AM	#5
marichiko Guest Posts: n/a	As it just so happens, I am trying to drum up some work online writing resumes for people, so I gave yours a quick try. You need to have a clearly stated employment goal at the top of your resume. I don't know what job you are applying for, so I just put in "Engineering Director." You can fill in whatever the actual job title is that you are hoping to get. Generally, jobs are listed in reverse chronological order, and the use of the first person "I" is avoided. Its also important to list whatever achievements you accomplished at each of your jobs. I wasn't sure about your position(s) at your first place of employment, but it sounds as though they promoted you, so put that in. Usually salary is negotiated when the job offer is made, so don't put down a desired salary on your resume. Use "action" words like "implemented," "coordinated," "supervised." Let me know if you find this revision useful and good luck! ******************************* Objective: Engineering Director Summary: Three years’ experience with a Fortune 500 company. Aggressive, independent and able to work under pressure in a dynamic environment. Excellent teamwork and coordination skills. Proficient at learning new applications and methods. Work Experience: Manufacturing Engineer Director Thomson (Foshan) Display Inc, Jul. 2003 - Present Duties Administer manufacturing engineering standards on the production line through thorough knowledge of ISO-90001 & ISO-14000 standards, document production methods and process improvements. Manage technicians Quality control. Arrange product testing. Superintend operation personnel and machinery. Oversee installation and alteration of equipment. Purchase spare parts. Achievements Directed and managed a successful QPT project of “Exhaust improvement”. Automatic Equipment Engineer LED TECH Inc, Jun. 2002 - Jul. 2003 Duties Recommend product changes through expert knowledge of the production process of the LED (light-emitting diode), Display and SMD; and facilitate equipment manufacturing. Implement design changes and trouble shoot problems. Effect disposition or rejection of material. Provide assistance to all other departments. Achievements Promoted from PE engineer after 3 months. Education: Bachelor of mechanistic design and Automation, Zhengzhou Institute of Light Industry, 2002. - Member of the Student Council Additional Training and Skills: Computer Abilities: Skilled in Windows operating systems, SAP producing system, common office software, outlook Excel and CAD, also solidworks, mechanical design software. English Skills: Continually improving English skills - 6 months of professional training. Good command of written English. Completed CET-4. References supplied upon request ******************************* Last edited by marichiko; 04-20-2006 at 11:57 AM.

04-20-2006, 10:44 PM	#6
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	Thanks Mari, I questioned the "mechanistic design and Automatization", also. Apparently those are the terms the school uses. __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

04-19-2006, 08:38 AM	#3
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	I would google resume samples, templates or forms. Many formats you can use in whatever word program you are using and print. http://www.career.vt.edu/JOBSEARC/Resumes/formats.htm http://jobsearchtech.about.com/od/re...l/aa070599.htm

04-21-2006, 06:29 AM	#7
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	Eric, are you applying at an American company in China? __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

04-23-2006, 07:10 AM	#8
Eric know yourself Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: GD province China Posts: 86	Thank all of you! sky,i take much time to look these website u give me. very useful to me. mary,thank you very much for correcting the resume and giving me such useful suggestion.thanks again. __________________ To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild of flower. Hold infinity in the palm of your hand, And eternity in and hour --William Blake

04-23-2006, 09:15 AM	#10
Happy Monkey I think this line's mostly filler. Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: DC Posts: 13,575	They make very popular stoves and lanterns. My guess is that most Boy Scout troops in the USA use Coleman lanterns. __________________ _________________ \|...............\| We live in the nick of times. \| Len 17, Wid 3 \| \|_______________\| [pics]

04-23-2006, 01:24 PM	#11
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	Oh yes, Coleman is one of, if not the, largest camping gear manufacturers. I say the best known name in the business. Eric, I've always relied on Coleman for quality products.....don't screw it up. __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

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