Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 9

monster · 09-25-2007, 12:28 PM

Oh dear, did I cause more trouble? I really should not come here when imbibing, sorry anyone I offended, you're all wonderful

Jeboduuza · 09-25-2007, 12:52 PM

what do you do
when the one you want to see
is gone and she isn't there

how can you deal
with your family, no less
because the chair she sat in is bare

where can you find the strength
to accept
that there's nothing you can do anymore

why does it always become so easy
to cry about it
until your face is sore

you were just a kid
she was your big sister
6 years have past
and you still truly miss her
there is no feeling as bad
that truly makes you sad
like knowing the girl you looked up to and loved
is now finding her way up above
without you

she's not here anymore
how i did adore
my big sister

i love you Ann

monster · 09-25-2007, 11:27 PM

Rose's are red, Violet's are blue
Rose is alive, Violet's worm poo
Both did bad drugs, Rose went for blow
Violet was hard, she chose the snow.

HungLikeJesus · 09-25-2007, 11:30 PM

That's ...

very colorful, monster.

Isn't it late - where you are?

DanaC · 09-26-2007, 03:37 AM

Monster I liked that. It cheered me up after reading jeb's heartbreaker.

Jeb, that was a really lovely poem.

HungLikeJesus · 09-26-2007, 08:31 AM

I came in yesterday at lunch to post a poem. It was just after Jeb had posted, and I couldn't write anything after reading his.

I still can't.

Flint · 09-26-2007, 10:11 AM

"Internet Breakup "

looking back on a lifetime
of hyperlinks, youtubes,
and jokes about boobs
where a grammar nazi's
potshot sees our way into
a world of webby wideness

inside this heart of mine
I still recall the valentine
"I choo-choo-choose you"
and I never thought I’d ever lose you
with references that clever, I thought
the good times might last forever

we wept when Dubya was elected
wept together and bared our souls
though of course, we never slept together
except, in our imaginations, in text
vicarious instant message quotations
our sad simulations of actual sex

so maybe it's better this way, maybe
we're better off as friends, alone
and in the end…

we'll always have bananaphone

HungLikeJesus · 09-26-2007, 10:44 AM

Inspired by IOTD (but could have other interpretations)

"To be on a satellite,
or on a ship
that does a satellite become,
is to know the attraction
for a planet
but never to know the touch;
endlessly to fall -
yet endlessly to miss."

So saying, the professor leaped to his
apparently
senseless

life

And while expecting 'death'
so many others

died.

Sundae · 09-26-2007, 11:30 AM

The Cellar

Down here
Dark things can thrive
The sort of things
You wouldn't want in your soup

Down here
Strong things can grow
Out of the light
But honest as the day

Down here
I have been helped
I have been liked
And I have shown my minge

DanaC · 09-26-2007, 11:33 AM

lol I must have missed the minge post sg:P

Flint · 09-26-2007, 11:43 AM

I steal ideas from the internet

if all the anonymous shmoes
I chose to plagarize, arose
to gouge out my eyes

I'd hide inside the Cellar,
bide my time, for months,
as a friendly feller, disguised
to blend in with you ċunts

monster · 09-30-2007, 09:20 PM

As I painted the deck
I could hear the squirrels
chirping out some morse code

As I wondered the text
I could see the squirrels
reporting on my home

"Big nut spotted, near the nest
on the flat branches, called decks

Using a false fluffy tail
To spread out poo from a pail"

monster · 10-02-2007, 09:22 AM

One Tuesday morning, when the fog was gloomy glum
I thought to myself, it's time for a new poem
Something cleansing, something fresh. something so brand new
Something so way out there, eclipsing all the poo

Sadly there the process stopped, brain was all fogged up
No wowness to be found inside a coffee cup
So you read with hopes all raised, waiting for the joke
Only to reach the end and realise there's no hope.

An anticlimax, I'm all done, ....well just about
I forgot one important thing I oughta shout
Whenever you feel down, depressed, or just sick
For the love of cock, don't forget to eat a dick.

lumberjim · 10-02-2007, 09:30 AM

my work here is done.

freshnesschronic · 10-10-2007, 06:44 PM

monday it was 88 degrees
i sweated and wished there was a breeze
today it was 50 degrees
i shivered and wished i didn't where my white tee

october
signs of global warming?
what the hell
though that movie was alarming
al gore

09-25-2007, 12:28 PM	#1
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Oh dear, did I cause more trouble? I really should not come here when imbibing, sorry anyone I offended, you're all wonderful __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-25-2007, 12:52 PM	#2
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	what do you do when the one you want to see is gone and she isn't there how can you deal with your family, no less because the chair she sat in is bare where can you find the strength to accept that there's nothing you can do anymore why does it always become so easy to cry about it until your face is sore you were just a kid she was your big sister 6 years have past and you still truly miss her there is no feeling as bad that truly makes you sad like knowing the girl you looked up to and loved is now finding her way up above without you she's not here anymore how i did adore my big sister i love you Ann __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

09-25-2007, 11:27 PM	#3
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Rose's are red, Violet's are blue Rose is alive, Violet's worm poo Both did bad drugs, Rose went for blow Violet was hard, she chose the snow. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-25-2007, 11:30 PM	#4
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	That's ... very colorful, monster. Isn't it late - where you are? __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

09-26-2007, 08:31 AM	#6
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	I came in yesterday at lunch to post a poem. It was just after Jeb had posted, and I couldn't write anything after reading his. I still can't. __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

09-26-2007, 03:37 AM	#5
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Monster I liked that. It cheered me up after reading jeb's heartbreaker. Jeb, that was a really lovely poem.

09-26-2007, 10:11 AM	#7
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	I wrote this in the shower this morning... "Internet Breakup " looking back on a lifetime of hyperlinks, youtubes, and jokes about boobs where a grammar nazi's potshot sees our way into a world of webby wideness inside this heart of mine I still recall the valentine "I choo-choo-choose you" and I never thought I’d ever lose you with references that clever, I thought the good times might last forever we wept when Dubya was elected wept together and bared our souls though of course, we never slept together except, in our imaginations, in text vicarious instant message quotations our sad simulations of actual sex so maybe it's better this way, maybe we're better off as friends, alone and in the end… we'll always have bananaphone __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio** Last edited by Flint; 09-26-2007 at 11:35 AM. Reason: changed "remember" to "recall"

09-26-2007, 10:44 AM	#8
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	Inspired by IOTD (but could have other interpretations) "To be on a satellite, or on a ship that does a satellite become, is to know the attraction for a planet but never to know the touch; endlessly to fall - yet endlessly to miss." So saying, the professor leaped to his apparently senseless life And while expecting 'death' so many others died. __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

09-26-2007, 11:30 AM	#9
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	The Cellar Down here Dark things can thrive The sort of things You wouldn't want in your soup Down here Strong things can grow Out of the light But honest as the day Down here I have been helped I have been liked And I have shown my minge __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac

09-26-2007, 11:33 AM	#10
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	lol I must have missed the minge post sg:P

09-26-2007, 11:43 AM	#11
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	"I Steal Ideas From The Internet" I steal ideas from the internet if all the anonymous shmoes I chose to plagarize, arose to gouge out my eyes I'd hide inside the Cellar, bide my time, for months, as a friendly feller, disguised to blend in with you ċunts __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

09-30-2007, 09:20 PM	#12
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	As I painted the deck I could hear the squirrels chirping out some morse code As I wondered the text I could see the squirrels reporting on my home "Big nut spotted, near the nest on the flat branches, called decks Using a false fluffy tail To spread out poo from a pail" __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

10-02-2007, 09:22 AM	#13
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	One Tuesday morning, when the fog was gloomy glum I thought to myself, it's time for a new poem Something cleansing, something fresh. something so brand new Something so way out there, eclipsing all the poo Sadly there the process stopped, brain was all fogged up No wowness to be found inside a coffee cup So you read with hopes all raised, waiting for the joke Only to reach the end and realise there's no hope. An anticlimax, I'm all done, ....well just about I forgot one important thing I oughta shout Whenever you feel down, depressed, or just sick For the love of cock, don't forget to eat a dick. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

10-02-2007, 09:30 AM	#14
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	my work here is done. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

10-10-2007, 06:44 PM	#15
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	monday it was 88 degrees i sweated and wished there was a breeze today it was 50 degrees i shivered and wished i didn't where my white tee october signs of global warming? what the hell though that movie was alarming al gore

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