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wolf · 01-13-2007, 02:38 PM

That is very beautiful.

My heartfelt condolences, to you and your family.

monster · 01-13-2007, 08:40 PM

Thanks all. I feel confident enough to go ahead and send it now. And it helps a lot to have written it. I now know that I will be OK with my decision not to return.

Beestie, I love the re-write, but unfortunately it doesn't "sound" like me (especially the "gotten" -one Americanism I have yet to/refuse to pick up

). I do hope you write professionally, though, because that is beautiful. Thanks for your help and consideration.

Beestie · 01-13-2007, 09:08 PM

What you wrote was beautiful in its own right and my version was in no way a judgement of your heartfelt verse. Just something I wanted to do.

monster · 01-13-2007, 09:12 PM

I took it in exactly the way you intended it and it touched me that you spent time on it, thanks.

01-13-2007, 02:38 PM	#16
wolf lobber of scimitars Join Date: Jul 2001 Location: Phila Burbs Posts: 20,774	That is very beautiful. My heartfelt condolences, to you and your family. __________________ wolf eht htiw og "Conspiracies are the norm, not the exception." --G. Edward Griffin The Creature from Jekyll Island High Priestess of the Church of the Whale Penis

01-13-2007, 08:40 PM	#17
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Thanks all. I feel confident enough to go ahead and send it now. And it helps a lot to have written it. I now know that I will be OK with my decision not to return. Beestie, I love the re-write, but unfortunately it doesn't "sound" like me (especially the "gotten" -one Americanism I have yet to/refuse to pick up ). I do hope you write professionally, though, because that is beautiful. Thanks for your help and consideration. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

01-13-2007, 09:08 PM	#18
Beestie -◊\|≡·∙■·∙≡\|◊- Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Parts unknown. Posts: 4,081	What you wrote was beautiful in its own right and my version was in no way a judgement of your heartfelt verse. Just something I wanted to do. __________________ ♠ ♥ ♣ ♦

01-13-2007, 09:12 PM	#19
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	I took it in exactly the way you intended it and it touched me that you spent time on it, thanks. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

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