Asylum - Page 2

DanaC · 08-23-2006, 11:08 AM

The song in my head *smiles* There's always a tune in my head when I write, but it's usually one of my own devising. Generally it's a very simple repetetive tune.
Usually, it's the opening line and the accompanying tune that hit me first, the rest is then crafted around that.

Quote:

did you exchange a walk on part in the war for the lead role in a cage?

I may be being dense, but I am not sure what you meant by this.

lumberjim · 08-23-2006, 11:45 AM

that's a line from 'wish you were here'.

DanaC · 08-23-2006, 12:19 PM

ahhhh. Sorry. me being dense :P

skysidhe · 08-26-2006, 11:12 AM

A very good poem. You are a solid writer. I don't think it is emotionally manipulative at all. More like a peek behind a curtain we don't usually get to see. Thank you.

DanaC · 08-26-2006, 02:21 PM

Thanks Sky!

08-23-2006, 11:45 AM	#17
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	that's a line from 'wish you were here'. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

08-23-2006, 12:19 PM	#18
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	ahhhh. Sorry. me being dense :P

08-26-2006, 11:12 AM	#19
skysidhe ~~Life is either a daring adventure or nothing.~~ Join Date: Apr 2006 Posts: 6,828	A very good poem. You are a solid writer. I don't think it is emotionally manipulative at all. More like a peek behind a curtain we don't usually get to see. Thank you.

08-26-2006, 02:21 PM	#20
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Thanks Sky!

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