Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 17

Giant Salamander · 02-17-2008, 06:26 PM

thanks; liked yours too.
It blew my mind last night, granted I was quite high

Giant Salamander · 02-18-2008, 01:30 PM

It slithers over rolls of fat,
Wet worm that's lithe and wry
It smells of water, rock and scat
And chicken when deep fried
No matter how you twist and slap
It coils round your head
Sinks its teeth deep in your fat
And snuggles till you're dead

Flint · 02-18-2008, 03:54 PM

meeting meeting
action item deadline
maggot-infested innards
in a shallow grave
a meaningless struggle
thank God, Jesus saves

yes, Im being facetious

Giant Salamander · 02-19-2008, 09:45 AM

All water has left me
Through the hole in my crotch;
It seeks better things
Than internal dry rot
You can see it in my eyes,
My skin, my snot
Hydrated and happy
Is something I'm not

freshnesschronic · 02-19-2008, 03:23 PM

can you...
fly so high
in the sky
make the birds below you cry?

eat a bowl
pay a toll
try not to overload?

do that thing
try to sing
have your telephone ring

but all you're really doin is...

sitting on your ass
smoking grass
passing gas then taking a nap

can you?

do something?

DanaC · 02-19-2008, 04:07 PM

Oh I like that fresh. That's really good.

freshnesschronic · 02-20-2008, 03:40 AM

grazi, signorina

Giant Salamander · 02-20-2008, 07:06 PM

A fleshy lip that squirts and flips
It's stinky, sticky, wet, and rich
It's nice without the icky bits
But monkey business always is

Flint · 02-20-2008, 10:56 PM

this word rhymes with turd
this one sounds like something
else I have to think of one that goes
with the first one first let's do bird
and then the other one has a ring
to it when I got around to it I slew it
oops hold on let's stay on track
oh crap I just lost my place again
begin again with ring thing crack
crap flapjack halfstack Kerouac
paddywhack give a dog a bone
a hog a home alone phone

Giant Salamander · 02-20-2008, 11:50 PM

Hairs are trees
Flesh is dirt
Cheeks are mountains
North, a shirt

Down below,
A crater vast
Puckered tight
And full of gas

Giant Salamander · 02-21-2008, 07:31 PM

Sprawling over dawning stars
Rolling clouds that have your form
Watch the rain pour out your limbs
Green lands swell beneath your storm
Watch the cycle, day to night
Listen as cicadas swarm
Clouds are still, shriveled dry
Evening trickle is no more

monster · 02-21-2008, 09:36 PM

Red Lobster and Sam’s by Dr. Scripp

It’s time for field trips
Said the Brit who sells Scrip

Oh no! said the snow
Oh no! said the blow
We will not go!

We do not want the melting ice
We do not like the weather nice.
We do not want kids out of doors
We do not like it when it thaws

Tough luck, Winter’s Grip
Said the Brit who sells Scrip

Time’s up, winter snow
Time’s up winter blow
Now you must go

The Parent Are Here! Quick, you must flee!
The parents are here to buy scrip and get free

Free what? said the winter, defeated and awed
Free cash said the Scripster as she opened her store

We can fund field trips and
New classroom equipment
We can send the all the kids to the moon
We can repaint the hallways
With murals for always
And teach them to play merry tunes.

Oh the things they will see
Oh the thinks they will think
Oh the landscapes they’ll eat
Oh the ideas they will drink

Alas, said the Brit
The Brit Who sell Scrip
This cannot happen
Not one tiny bit

Unless…..

Giant Salamander · 02-22-2008, 11:30 AM

I like it.
I had to imagine an English accent on a couple lines; then they suddenly rhymed.

monster · 02-22-2008, 12:33 PM

(It's in honor of Dr Seuss month)

Trilby · 02-22-2008, 01:54 PM

goddess, all you people are wunderkind!

I like them all, but daymn, giant salamander--yours are beaUtiful! Esp.#244 & #250. That, my friends, is art.

02-17-2008, 06:26 PM	#241
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	thanks; liked yours too. It blew my mind last night, granted I was quite high __________________ random artstuff

02-18-2008, 01:30 PM	#242
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	It slithers over rolls of fat, Wet worm that's lithe and wry It smells of water, rock and scat And chicken when deep fried No matter how you twist and slap It coils round your head Sinks its teeth deep in your fat And snuggles till you're dead __________________ random artstuff

02-18-2008, 03:54 PM	#243
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	meeting meeting action item deadline maggot-infested innards in a shallow grave a meaningless struggle thank God, Jesus saves yes, Im being facetious __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-19-2008, 09:45 AM	#244
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	All water has left me Through the hole in my crotch; It seeks better things Than internal dry rot You can see it in my eyes, My skin, my snot Hydrated and happy Is something I'm not __________________ random artstuff

02-20-2008, 07:06 PM	#248
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	A fleshy lip that squirts and flips It's stinky, sticky, wet, and rich It's nice without the icky bits But monkey business always is __________________ random artstuff

02-19-2008, 03:23 PM	#245
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	can you... fly so high in the sky make the birds below you cry? eat a bowl pay a toll try not to overload? do that thing try to sing have your telephone ring but all you're really doin is... sitting on your ass smoking grass passing gas then taking a nap can you? do something?

02-19-2008, 04:07 PM	#246
DanaC We have to go back, Kate! Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Yorkshire Posts: 25,964	Oh I like that fresh. That's really good.

02-20-2008, 03:40 AM	#247
freshnesschronic Professor Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 1,555	grazi, signorina

02-20-2008, 10:56 PM	#249
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	this word rhymes with turd this one sounds like something else I have to think of one that goes with the first one first let's do bird and then the other one has a ring to it when I got around to it I slew it oops hold on let's stay on track oh crap I just lost my place again begin again with ring thing crack crap flapjack halfstack Kerouac paddywhack give a dog a bone a hog a home alone phone __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

02-20-2008, 11:50 PM	#250
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Hairs are trees Flesh is dirt Cheeks are mountains North, a shirt Down below, A crater vast Puckered tight And full of gas __________________ random artstuff

02-21-2008, 07:31 PM	#251
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	Sprawling over dawning stars Rolling clouds that have your form Watch the rain pour out your limbs Green lands swell beneath your storm Watch the cycle, day to night Listen as cicadas swarm Clouds are still, shriveled dry Evening trickle is no more __________________ random artstuff

02-21-2008, 09:36 PM	#252
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Red Lobster and Sam’s by Dr. Scripp It’s time for field trips Said the Brit who sells Scrip Oh no! said the snow Oh no! said the blow We will not go! We do not want the melting ice We do not like the weather nice. We do not want kids out of doors We do not like it when it thaws Tough luck, Winter’s Grip Said the Brit who sells Scrip Time’s up, winter snow Time’s up winter blow Now you must go The Parent Are Here! Quick, you must flee! The parents are here to buy scrip and get free Free what? said the winter, defeated and awed Free cash said the Scripster as she opened her store We can fund field trips and New classroom equipment We can send the all the kids to the moon We can repaint the hallways With murals for always And teach them to play merry tunes. Oh the things they will see Oh the thinks they will think Oh the landscapes they’ll eat Oh the ideas they will drink Alas, said the Brit The Brit Who sell Scrip This cannot happen Not one tiny bit Unless….. __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-22-2008, 11:30 AM	#253
Giant Salamander Deity of Dogs Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 114	I like it. I had to imagine an English accent on a couple lines; then they suddenly rhymed. __________________ random artstuff

02-22-2008, 12:33 PM	#254
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	(It's in honor of Dr Seuss month) __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

02-22-2008, 01:54 PM	#255
Trilby Slattern of the Swail Join Date: Jul 2004 Posts: 15,654	goddess, all you people are wunderkind! I like them all, but daymn, giant salamander--yours are beaUtiful! Esp.#244 & #250. That, my friends, is art.

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