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I hear them call the tide
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I'm interested by your four line format. I thought that Haikus were in a 5 7 5 format, but your 4 line idea allows you other variations on this theme, as the two "orphan" syllables can attach to any of the three 5s, allowing 7 5 5 and 5 5 7 as well as variations on the (5 5 5 2) theme. Or am I just reading them incorrectly?
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku interesting that this definition also mentions a "cutting word" -I hadn't learned that before. here are some more haiku threads: http://www.cellar.org/showthread.php?t=22900 http://www.cellar.org/showthread.php?t=15718 http://www.cellar.org/showthread.php?t=16098
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