Farewell Letter

HungLikeJesus · 01-16-2008, 11:21 AM

Radar, I think that sounds very good - positive and cheerful, without gloating.

xoxoxoBruce · 01-16-2008, 11:26 AM

Drop the repetitive, "During my time here, I've grown personally and professionally".

glatt · 01-16-2008, 11:28 AM

There is a bit too much repetition in that middle paragraph, but overall, it sound really good.

ZenGum · 01-16-2008, 11:37 AM

I think it needs more "kiss my gold-plated ass you bunch of go-nowhere losers! You guys are sooooo screwed without me because I was the only one keeping this clapped-out tramp steamer of a company from capsizing completely and taking the lot of you incompetent, gossiping, mouth-breathing, backstabbing, coffee-swilling, whining, cube-dwelling, pin-striped slackers with it...."

What? You don't want to burn the bridges? *sigh* Ok, it's good as it is.

For a minute there I thought you were leaving US, Radar. Don't scare us like that.

01-16-2008, 11:21 AM	#1
HungLikeJesus Only looks like a disaster tourist Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: above 7,000 feet Posts: 7,208	Radar, I think that sounds very good - positive and cheerful, without gloating. __________________ Keep Your Bodies Off My Lawn SteveDallas's Random Thread Picker.

01-16-2008, 11:26 AM	#2
xoxoxoBruce The future is unwritten Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 71,105	Drop the repetitive, "During my time here, I've grown personally and professionally". __________________ The descent of man ~ Nixon, Friedman, Reagan, Trump.

01-16-2008, 11:37 AM	#4
ZenGum Doctor Wtf Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Badelaide, Baustralia Posts: 12,861	I think it needs more "kiss my gold-plated ass you bunch of go-nowhere losers! You guys are sooooo screwed without me because I was the only one keeping this clapped-out tramp steamer of a company from capsizing completely and taking the lot of you incompetent, gossiping, mouth-breathing, backstabbing, coffee-swilling, whining, cube-dwelling, pin-striped slackers with it...." What? You don't want to burn the bridges? sigh Ok, it's good as it is. For a minute there I thought you were leaving US, Radar. Don't scare us like that. __________________ Shut up and hug. MoreThanPretty, Nov 5, 2008. Just because I'm nominally polite, does not make me a pussy. Sundae Girl.

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01-16-2008, 11:28 AM	#3
glatt ™ Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Arlington, VA Posts: 27,717	There is a bit too much repetition in that middle paragraph, but overall, it sound really good.

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