Write a Spontaneous Poem - Page 8

lumberjim · 09-24-2007, 07:19 PM

in a sock

Jeboduuza · 09-24-2007, 07:20 PM

We got a plan, so down with the Man!

monster · 09-24-2007, 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jeboduuza

ock, cock

love it. minimalist and yet mocking the masses with an almost ironic application of rhyme

monster · 09-24-2007, 09:55 PM

Yo,
you're in teh cellarz, here's how it goes
Now you're a dwellar, reading bad prose
here in teh cellar, dwell sleaze and hos
there's lj who sucks, and flint who blows
there's jinx with her fantabulous boobs
(btw where's that vid on youtubez?)
there's nerds and wankers, old farts and n00bs
And Bri and Sundae -oh, back to boobs!
there's bruce and wolf -who make us behave
oh and there's elspode -wholly depraved
Ib is confused and Dana is brave
some are fucked-up and some are called Dave
You may feel you fit, you may feel strange
Whatever you need, we have full range
From deep thought to erratic deranged
-Now I must warn you, we eat your brains

Flint · 09-24-2007, 10:29 PM

so toss out any hot topic, we'll rock it
stop drop and roll if your scope is myopic
we'll blow your mind through your eye socket
and throw your behind to the troll to dropkick
so don't be schocked, we're locked and loaded
you got cold-cocked by a bastard who's bloated
and fat like a pig, oh, my bad, he's just big
my finger slipped when I wrote that shit

monster · 09-24-2007, 10:39 PM

Yo, yo, yo, the man flint said it
said what? not sure, just some real shit
you know, like deep stuff and... Brad Pitt
yeah, that Angelina, she has nice tits

monster · 09-24-2007, 10:46 PM

You better lose yourself in the cellar, the dwellars
You own it, you better never let it go
You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow
LJ, This guy comes once in a lifetime yo

lumberjim · 09-24-2007, 11:04 PM

I'm just.... big.. boned!, I got skillz, and hey...
you wish you was me!.... justcuzza>>> who i lay
my jinx got back!... and bumpy frontage too
just ask richlevy!, you know you can trust that jew.

monster · 09-25-2007, 12:20 AM

oh bumpy frontge, uh bumpy frontage
you know ya gotta plan for dat saggage
or may be not if ya hot and and ya got
a decent package wit no no baggage
I don' wanna go here, I need more beer
Dis is not clear,gemme outta here
I want man boobs or maybe chest hair
I don't wanna go to no les lair
The bumpy frontage, i wish was mine, bitch
yes i am a bust-coveting hag witch
Do boobs go throught that seven year itch?
now I need an organic club sandwich

Undertoad · 09-25-2007, 08:09 AM

That's right girl Cellar's the place for your sexin
Arr Eff Enn for your bad self flexin
We got butt shots tit shots cocks and backs and
There might even be a muthafuckin Texan
You can dream about hittin it male or female
Don't try young Ibby you'll get sent to the fed jail
Theres all kina shit up here on the menu
Hit up the tip mug if you want it continued

jinx · 09-25-2007, 11:39 AM

Wow, that's surprising, Shawnee deleted another post... ( I read it though, and took a screen shot because I knew she would)
You're a very small person Shawnee - and a coward. I pity you.

Such talent in the rest of this thread though. Srsly.

Shawnee123 · 09-25-2007, 11:44 AM

Yeah, I felt it was too mean, even for me...but go ahead and post it, you're so smart for screen shotting it.

Give your pet rat a biscuit and have her lay down on the foot of your bed.

God I so wanted you to like me.

jinx · 09-25-2007, 12:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shawnee123

Yeah, I felt it was too mean, even for me...

In your edit you said it was too good - now that I might post it - it was too mean. Coward.

monster · 09-25-2007, 12:28 PM

Oh dear, did I cause more trouble? I really should not come here when imbibing, sorry anyone I offended, you're all wonderful

Jeboduuza · 09-25-2007, 12:52 PM

what do you do
when the one you want to see
is gone and she isn't there

how can you deal
with your family, no less
because the chair she sat in is bare

where can you find the strength
to accept
that there's nothing you can do anymore

why does it always become so easy
to cry about it
until your face is sore

you were just a kid
she was your big sister
6 years have past
and you still truly miss her
there is no feeling as bad
that truly makes you sad
like knowing the girl you looked up to and loved
is now finding her way up above
without you

she's not here anymore
how i did adore
my big sister

i love you Ann

09-24-2007, 07:19 PM	#106
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	in a sock __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

09-24-2007, 07:20 PM	#107
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	We got a plan, so down with the Man! __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

09-24-2007, 09:55 PM	#109
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Yo, you're in teh cellarz, here's how it goes Now you're a dwellar, reading bad prose here in teh cellar, dwell sleaze and hos there's lj who sucks, and flint who blows there's jinx with her fantabulous boobs (btw where's that vid on youtubez?) there's nerds and wankers, old farts and n00bs And Bri and Sundae -oh, back to boobs! there's bruce and wolf -who make us behave oh and there's elspode -wholly depraved Ib is confused and Dana is brave some are fucked-up and some are called Dave You may feel you fit, you may feel strange Whatever you need, we have full range From deep thought to erratic deranged -Now I must warn you, we eat your brains __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-24-2007, 10:29 PM	#110
Flint Snowflake Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Dystopia Posts: 13,136	:::grabs a mic::: so toss out any hot topic, we'll rock it stop drop and roll if your scope is myopic we'll blow your mind through your eye socket and throw your behind to the troll to dropkick so don't be schocked, we're locked and loaded you got cold-cocked by a bastard who's bloated and fat like a pig, oh, my bad, he's just big my finger slipped when I wrote that shit __________________ **************** There's a level of facility that everyone needs to accomplish, and from there it's a matter of deciding for yourself how important ultra-facility is to your expression. ... I found, like Joseph Campbell said, if you just follow whatever gives you a little joy or excitement or awe, then you're on the right track. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Terry Bozzio**

09-24-2007, 10:39 PM	#111
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Yo, yo, yo, the man flint said it said what? not sure, just some real shit you know, like deep stuff and... Brad Pitt yeah, that Angelina, she has nice tits __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-24-2007, 10:46 PM	#112
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	You better lose yourself in the cellar, the dwellars You own it, you better never let it go You only get one shot, do not miss your chance to blow LJ, This guy comes once in a lifetime yo __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-24-2007, 11:04 PM	#113
lumberjim I can hear my ears Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 25,571	I'm just.... big.. boned!, I got skillz, and hey... you wish you was me!.... justcuzza>>> who i lay my jinx got back!... and bumpy frontage too just ask richlevy!, you know you can trust that jew. __________________ This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality Embrace this moment, remember We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan

09-25-2007, 12:20 AM	#114
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	oh bumpy frontge, uh bumpy frontage you know ya gotta plan for dat saggage or may be not if ya hot and and ya got a decent package wit no no baggage I don' wanna go here, I need more beer Dis is not clear,gemme outta here I want man boobs or maybe chest hair I don't wanna go to no les lair The bumpy frontage, i wish was mine, bitch yes i am a bust-coveting hag witch Do boobs go throught that seven year itch? now I need an organic club sandwich __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-25-2007, 08:09 AM	#115
Undertoad Radical Centrist Join Date: Jan 2001 Location: Cottage of Prussia Posts: 31,423	That's right girl Cellar's the place for your sexin Arr Eff Enn for your bad self flexin We got butt shots tit shots cocks and backs and There might even be a muthafuckin Texan You can dream about hittin it male or female Don't try young Ibby you'll get sent to the fed jail Theres all kina shit up here on the menu Hit up the tip mug if you want it continued

09-25-2007, 11:39 AM	#116
jinx Come on, cat. Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: general vicinity of Philadelphia area Posts: 7,013	Wow, that's surprising, Shawnee deleted another post... ( I read it though, and took a screen shot because I knew she would) You're a very small person Shawnee - and a coward. I pity you. Such talent in the rest of this thread though. Srsly. __________________ Crying won't help you, praying won't do you no good.

09-25-2007, 11:44 AM	#117
Shawnee123 Why, you're a regular Alfred E Einstein, ain't ya? Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 21,206	Yeah, I felt it was too mean, even for me...but go ahead and post it, you're so smart for screen shotting it. Give your pet rat a biscuit and have her lay down on the foot of your bed. God I so wanted you to like me. __________________ A word to the wise ain't necessary - it's the stupid ones who need the advice. --Bill Cosby

09-25-2007, 12:28 PM	#119
monster I hear them call the tide Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Perpetual Chaos Posts: 30,852	Oh dear, did I cause more trouble? I really should not come here when imbibing, sorry anyone I offended, you're all wonderful __________________ The most difficult thing is the decision to act, the rest is merely tenacity Amelia Earhart

09-25-2007, 12:52 PM	#120
Jeboduuza Custom User Title Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: de_dust Posts: 141	what do you do when the one you want to see is gone and she isn't there how can you deal with your family, no less because the chair she sat in is bare where can you find the strength to accept that there's nothing you can do anymore why does it always become so easy to cry about it until your face is sore you were just a kid she was your big sister 6 years have past and you still truly miss her there is no feeling as bad that truly makes you sad like knowing the girl you looked up to and loved is now finding her way up above without you she's not here anymore how i did adore my big sister i love you Ann __________________ I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it. -Voltaire

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