A poem...

cowhead · 06-02-2005, 03:30 AM

no shit.. speaking as low cow on the pecking order of things, and have long been reading about how nasty things can get around here.. wow.. I thought the local boards were bad. anyway! the poem!

I'm not a big fan of that rhyme scheme.. (then again mine is to try to rhyme every third line.. I don't know why, but it's that way) but you managed to work it out in an almost dylanesque style in parts, which I really like.

kinda dark, and hopeless.. then again it is meant to be an expression of emotional turmoil. so my main question is.. did you feel better once you wrote it? (and other than this bru-ha-ha that erupted around it) did it ease some of the pain or only make that moment freeze in time? (to be re-lived over and over? )

06-02-2005, 03:30 AM	#11
cowhead halve your cake and eat it too. Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Georgia.. by way of Lawrence Kansas Posts: 1,359	no shit.. speaking as low cow on the pecking order of things, and have long been reading about how nasty things can get around here.. wow.. I thought the local boards were bad. anyway! the poem! I'm not a big fan of that rhyme scheme.. (then again mine is to try to rhyme every third line.. I don't know why, but it's that way) but you managed to work it out in an almost dylanesque style in parts, which I really like. kinda dark, and hopeless.. then again it is meant to be an expression of emotional turmoil. so my main question is.. did you feel better once you wrote it? (and other than this bru-ha-ha that erupted around it) did it ease some of the pain or only make that moment freeze in time? (to be re-lived over and over? ) __________________ no my child.. this is not my desire..I'm digging for fire.

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