Hmm..

[JBKlyde]

I'm attempting to up grade from creative expression to real entertainment please critique me...

Monkey On my Back,
I'm a Suicide Jack,
If your soul is black,
That's The c-o-m-b-i-n-a-tion,
Of every generation,
Look in to my eyes,
I'm saying my good byes,
But every time I leave,
People start to grieve,
So tell me what you need,
Every body bleeds,
We're all the same color,
Underneath the knife,
So if you promise not to chop,
I'll make you my wife,
And when I finally find the one,
I'll be walking on the sun,
ANd then we will be warm forever,
Just rhyming for fun,
The devils eyes are like,
That of a wolf,
Mine are like the pages of a book,
Can you read my heart or,
Is it too broke,
If you think I'm a looser,
Then tell another joke,
I made this far,
And I don't even own a car,
Feelings are a way of expressing,
Who we ARe,
So tell me how you feel,
and this just got real,
ling cheating and stealing,
Just ain't the deal.