Write a Spontaneous Poem

Sundae · 05-17-2008, 11:40 AM

Oh Dana, that so resonates!
It does tie in with something I was thinking of last week.

My attempt to capture the feeling. Influenced by losing Dylan:

The world is full and fertile.
Trees swell and burst into green fireworks of froth.
Shower and heat and heat and growth,
I can see the threshing world recreate.

And I mostly issue sweat.
Tears run from me polluting the rain.
I salt the earth for miles around,
Making barren all that touches me.

Nature has left me behind
Creating its own reward to those who will.
I will suffer through this burgeoning,
And love/ dread many more.

05-17-2008, 11:40 AM	#11
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	Oh Dana, that so resonates! It does tie in with something I was thinking of last week. My attempt to capture the feeling. Influenced by losing Dylan: The world is full and fertile. Trees swell and burst into green fireworks of froth. Shower and heat and heat and growth, I can see the threshing world recreate. And I mostly issue sweat. Tears run from me polluting the rain. I salt the earth for miles around, Making barren all that touches me. Nature has left me behind Creating its own reward to those who will. I will suffer through this burgeoning, And love/ dread many more. __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac Last edited by Sundae; 05-17-2008 at 12:25 PM.

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