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polaroid of perfection
Join Date: Sep 2005
Location: West Yorkshire
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Brianna!
Needius Worse Than Ever is proper poetry imho And bear in mind my humble opinionated self reads a lot of it It reminds me so much of U A Fanthorpe, who herself worked as a nurse on a psychiatric ward (I'll check that - I know she worked with mental patients) You have a beautiful turn of phrase and some outstanding imagery Just ETA because I've realised it might not be yours! If it is, you amaze me. You do anyway
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Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac Last edited by Sundae; 04-19-2008 at 08:05 PM. Reason: May not be Brianna's poem |
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