Marine wedding.

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Originally Posted by marichiko

OK, the first sentence begins with a conjunction, which is a no-no.

Not really a no-no. See this page

Originally Posted by marichiko

The phrase “country western singers played guitars and sang love songs” is both confusing and redundant.

Yeah, I'll go along with this.

Originally Posted by marichiko

“The groom took her by the hand” – took whom? The flower girl?

The referent is implied in the previous sentence. This is a wedding we're talking about. Are you really confused?

Originally Posted by marichiko

This could actually be a powerful thought instead of sentimental tripe:

My guess is that this is your real issue. We'll have to agree to disagree on this one. I'm an old softy. It's well known that I get the sniffles at AT&T and Hallmark commercials.

And I'm a sucker for sentimental tripe.