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12-08-2008, 10:54 AM

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dar512

dar512 is now Pete Zicato

Join Date: May 2003

Location: Chicago suburb

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Originally Posted by tw

Did I use too many words again? Sorry.

No it was your choice of passive voice. Passive voice is a bad habit. It makes your writing less forceful and harder to read.

It is also a hard habit to break (speaking from experience).

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