Until the End of Time

JBKlyde · 11-12-2011, 01:37 PM

I feel so un-forgiven,
But I know,
Jesus is Living,
Deep within my soul,
The Light is Just unknown,
I will not condone,
What I do not understand,
I'm just working out plan,
To make it to heaven,
Like a smoldering flame,
I'm not ashamed,
To speak my heart,
Maybe I'm not so smart
But I will express my art,
And Live my life,
Conciquences of sin,
Bend the realm of pretend,
I just want to love God,
Untill the end...

you finish this poem

DanaC · 11-12-2011, 02:26 PM

No.

:p

I'd really like to see how you end your poems.

JBKlyde · 11-12-2011, 02:56 PM

I finish my poems with "you finish this poem"...

it could be a lot of fun if you tried///

Griff · 11-12-2011, 03:00 PM

so I forgive myself
and begin.

Sundae · 11-12-2011, 03:54 PM

Come What May

JBKlyde · 11-12-2011, 04:36 PM

That's a bit dramatic sundae.. I like drama.. and griff.. I think your right sometimes you have to forgive your self before you can move on....

anyone else wanna give it a try...

11-12-2011, 01:37 PM	#1
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	Until the End of Time I feel so un-forgiven, But I know, Jesus is Living, Deep within my soul, The Light is Just unknown, I will not condone, What I do not understand, I'm just working out plan, To make it to heaven, Like a smoldering flame, I'm not ashamed, To speak my heart, Maybe I'm not so smart But I will express my art, And Live my life, Conciquences of sin, Bend the realm of pretend, I just want to love God, Untill the end... you finish this poem Last edited by JBKlyde; 11-12-2011 at 01:48 PM.

11-12-2011, 03:00 PM	#4
Griff still says videotape Join Date: Feb 2001 Posts: 26,813	so I forgive myself and begin. __________________ If you would only recognize that life is hard, things would be so much easier for you. - Louis D. Brandeis

11-12-2011, 03:54 PM	#5
Sundae polaroid of perfection Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: West Yorkshire Posts: 24,185	Come What May __________________ Life's hard you know, so strike a pose on a Cadillac

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11-12-2011, 02:56 PM	#3
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	I finish my poems with "you finish this poem"... it could be a lot of fun if you tried///

11-12-2011, 04:36 PM	#6
JBKlyde Banned Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Encrypted Into an AmpitheaterWall Posts: 1,722	That's a bit dramatic sundae.. I like drama.. and griff.. I think your right sometimes you have to forgive your self before you can move on.... anyone else wanna give it a try...

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