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Halloween Song
I'm taking hell down with me,
Drink a pint of whisky, Feeling kind of frisky, My eyes are aw-full misty, But I ain't scared to rack, Satan in the balls, This calls for toast, So watch the devil roast, Kingdom divided, Against itself will fall, And fall we will, Nothing can stop the thrill, Of these blue and, Purple yellow pills, Atleast I know I will, Have done a good deed, Planting the seeds, OF anti evil weeds, In my final breath, I will have defeated death, Maybe I end up in hell, But it's better than being, Under this spell, So when the lighting thunders, You don't have to wander, Just know that this, Blundering mess, Was just a test to see if, I could rise above the rest, I was just tying to the best, Job I knew how and apparently, That wasn't enough, So this is too tough, and a little too rough, But I've had enough, OF the misscommunication, My head is weary, From all the inflation, So say good bye to the devil, Cause he's going down like a rock, And hopefully now you will stop, And in the end your love is on top. Last edited by JBKlyde; 09-19-2012 at 01:55 PM. |
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Disclaimer: I don't do drugs nor do I condone the use of them. This poem is strictly for entertainment but if it scares people enough to repent and frustrates the plans of evil doers and the devils dominion then let it be so.
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JBK, I think you're very talented. Thanks for posting this.
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thank you
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Am I the only one that gets an Eminem/Slim Shady vibe from these?
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well this poem is a bit out of wack I admit... not one of my best works..
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I didn't see anything at all wrong with it JB.
It's just the way I read it/them, the timing/rhyming schemes make me hear Eminem rapping your work inside my head.
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do you like him..?? I don't like living in his shadow.. but I'm sure he's not as bad as I think he is...
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Eminem's a fucking genius. A true poet.
Grav was complimenting you. And yes, at times, I can see what you mean Grav. Though I don't think this one is a particularly good example of it. There have been a couple though.
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"Father God in Heaven, For you my Heart Sings, Jesus Christ of Nazareth, You are the King of Kings,.. Unified by Love, And Flying your wings, y-f-t-p |
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I don't need no wings
Or things but i would like a heart that sings I believe that power is within myself and Not in some painted icon that sits on a shelf |
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This is Halloween, this is Halloween
Pumpkins scream in the dead of night This is Halloween, Everybody make a scene Trick or treat 'til the neighbors gonna die of fright... |
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