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09-14-2011, 07:03 AM | #1 |
Slattern of the Swail
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Dream Poem not by that one weird guy
As I was waking up this morning I dreamt that I had placed a poem in the New Yorker. The beginning was something about blowing my nose but the ending was crystal clear: the last line was this:
The bright humanity of my socks. pretty kul, huh?
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09-14-2011, 07:55 AM | #2 |
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I had the same dream! The first line was:
I blow my nose at you, cocks!
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09-14-2011, 08:19 AM | #3 |
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I like very much.
I had a dream where I came up with a really powerful image - that when a cat rubs you, it is really barcoding you. It seemed so elegant and concise. But when I woke up I realised it doesn't really work properly. I was so disappointed.
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09-16-2011, 11:29 PM | #4 |
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Of course, it works on a perfect 1 to 1 correlation with reality--when a cat rubs against you it is marking you with its scent glands. It isn't scanning your barcode, it is literally stamping you with one; placing you into its inventory.
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09-17-2011, 04:26 AM | #5 |
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See that's where it fell down. Because most of us experience barcodes at the point of purchase. We don't have a relationship with applying barcodes. So you're right - the logic worked, but the image isn't useful.
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