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Old 02-02-2012, 12:08 PM   #1
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Failure to Love...

What do you do??
When no one love's you??
What do you say??
On a rainy day?
When every things so blue,
And nothing goes your way?


y-f-t-p
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Old 02-02-2012, 08:04 PM   #2
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y-f-t-p?


Not Y-M-C-A?

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Old 02-02-2012, 08:11 PM   #3
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You Finish This Poem.



It's his own personal meme.
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Old 02-02-2012, 08:37 PM   #4
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What do you do??
When no one love's you??
What do you say??
On a rainy day?
When every things so blue,
And nothing goes your way?

Narrow your gaze
stow it away
reel in your heart
forget the best part
look to the days
try not to fart



ah, damn. almost had it.
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Old 02-02-2012, 09:51 PM   #5
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I would appear to be,
That what I see,
Is that Jesus love me,
Why worry,
You don't,
Have the whole story,
My Hearts in a blender,
That woman I'll,
Always remember,
Through Her Eyes,
She's my demise,
And She Likes it,
I'm just wasting away,
In this pit,
With a hand full of friends,
And the yens in the light,
Dark of yang,
Through earthly hell I might,
Be taught to love,
In a use full way,
Why even bother cause I'm,
In the grey,
Just know,
That hell's,
A place not to go,
And when it snows,
It flows,
So just pinch your nose,
Cause all them ladies,
Like the pant-y hoes,
and I'm not gay,
I'm just hanging,
With the bros.


y-f-t-p

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Old 02-03-2012, 04:11 AM   #6
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That one doesn't need finishing. It reads as complete to me. I rather like it actually.
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