But this feels more crafted. I've reread it now half a dozen times. I really like it a lot. It has a deftness to it. Serious but done with a light touch. I love the way the structure breaks down after the first 'does not compute' and the staccato rhythms from the repetitions afterwards. Brilliant.
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I or not-I sit here post-chemo, post-surgery, post-surgery, post-surgery, post-surgery, post ... oh, fuck it ...
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Love it.