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Old 06-10-2013, 05:43 AM   #5
DanaC
We have to go back, Kate!
 
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JB this is really brilliant. I agree with Ortho, this is one of the best poems you've posted.

Love this bit:

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But lips and stomach have a thirst,
To do something great with my life,
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