[Ocean's Edge]

"it was a dark and stormy night" ... *grins*


But no, in all seriousness - it ain't great, but you WROTE it.... I've written a ton of crap, and I'll write a ton of crap more, because if you're a writer, you write .... and whether or not you ever get great, you will get better, it's the only way to get better, ....

so WOOT - go you!