thank you undertoad! yeah, it is too long. i've been thinking i should redo it with only one bridge and basically just shorten it. my voice is probably lost in the mix because i don't like my voice. i'd actually rather have someone else sing it..and your idea of using the words "test you"- i like it. i wanted to submit some songs to publishers but i don't think the songs are ready yet. it's input like this that i need to help me fine-tune them...
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