Thread: From the Dark Corners of my Mind
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Old 03-24-2010, 09:42 AM   #13
DanaC
We have to go back, Kate!
 
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Well, I thought it was really interesting. I do think it'd benefit from doublespacing, possibly, but nonetheless I found it quite beautiful.
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