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The songs are ... young. Awkward word choices and predictable rhymes. Melodies that sing poorly and don't really stick. She has a clear voice and some good instincts, but these songs aren't ready to start sending out saying "Look at me!"
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This body holding me reminds me of my own mortality
Embrace this moment, remember
We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion ~MJKeenan
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