Thanks. I see some errors in it but as a believer in accurate depiction of character I wouldn't want to try to make the student come off like a rocket scientist or something.
I refrained from the angle of using actual conversations as it didn't seem in keeping with the "valuing people" agenda. lol
Sis in law wrote back and said it exceeded her expectations. I can't wait because my ex boss will love it! I do miss her!