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Old 12-08-2008, 10:54 AM   #14
dar512
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Originally Posted by tw View Post
Did I use too many words again? Sorry.
No it was your choice of passive voice. Passive voice is a bad habit. It makes your writing less forceful and harder to read.

It is also a hard habit to break (speaking from experience).
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