Tim, some honest suggestions:
--I would leave the sarcastic quips out. State the facts plainly and simply.
--I would only hint at the possibility that it was due to out-of-state plates.
--Express your general concern with the situation, perhaps find out if anyone else you know has gone through this, then hint at the problems that things like this could cause the state of LA (like losing gambling revenue from Texas residents).
--Send it to the Mayor's office in Baton Rouge as well as the newspaper there.
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